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My favourite room My favourite room in my house is the living room because it's a really comfortable place to hang out with my family. It’s is the largest room in the house. It has L-shape with about 35 m2. The living room has a wooden window and balcony door face the street. The walls are painted light orange and the ceramic floor tile is light brown. The curtains are white. In the left side of the living room there is a large bookshelf wall full of books and a nice sitting area with two comfortable sofas, a recliner and a coffee table. In this area there is a television and a HI-FI music system. In the right side, there’s a dining area with a big rectangular table, 8 chairs and a cupboard. In this area there are some pictures made with puzzles, one of them with 10.000 pieces. There are also a computer and a printer on the table.

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My favourite room in my house is the living room because it's a really comfortable place to hang out with my family. It’s is the largest room in the house. It has an L-shape with about 35 m2. The living room has a wooden window and balcony door face facing the street. The walls are painted light orange and the ceramic floor tile is light brown. The curtains are white. In On the left side of the living room there is a large bookshelf wall full of books and a nice sitting area with two comfortable sofas, a recliner, and a coffee table. In this area there is a television and a HI-FI music system. In On the right side, there’s a dining area with a big rectangular table, 8 chairs, and a cupboard. In this area there are some pictures made with puzzles, one of them with 10,000 pieces. There are also a computer and a printer on the table.
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My favourite room

My favourite room in my house is the living room because it's a really comfortable place to hang out relax(1) with my family. It’s is the largest room in the house. It has is L-shaped with about 35 m2.
The living room has a wooden window and balcony door(2) face facing the street. The walls are painted light orange and the ceramic floor tile is light brown. The curtains are white.
In On the left side of the living room there is a large bookshelf wall full of books and a nice sitting area with two comfortable sofas, a recliner and a coffee table. In this area there is a television and a HI-FI music system.
In On the right side, there’s a dining area with a big rectangular table, 8 chairs and a buffet cupboard(3). In this area there are some pictures made with out of puzzles, one of them with 10.000 pieces. There are is also a computer and a printer on the table.


(1) "hang out" is not really wrong, but I would say "relax" to express this idea.
(2) Is it a "balcony" or a "balcony door"?
(3) I think you mean a "Buffet cupboard", which is different from a "cupboard".

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Thank you so much for your corrections!!
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"facing the street"
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Very good! The only thing I would change is "it has an L-shape". Awesome job!

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