“Some teachers prefer the group study methods for their students while others prefer the individual learning method. Which one do you prefer? Discuss the benefits of group study and individual learning. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.” The study method is fundamental: It will follow a student through
out his life. Some teachers believe that the individual learning method is preferable; however, some of them argue that to study
into in groups provides more
benefices benefits. Several studies have been done about the advantages of collaborative learning
. It is scientifically proven that students,
placed into cooperative teams, achieve better goals. In particular, they develop several abilities
about like collaboration
, and sharing,
discussing discussion and facing each other's
(**are you missing a word here after other's? I am not sure what you could mean).
On the Virginia Tech’s “J
ournal of Technology
Education”, in 1995,
was published a research
study (or "paper") about the results of shared learning at university:
according to that study, study
ing in groups increase
s critical thinking skills. Although many people believe that shared learning is better,
someone (**someone means one only person)
some thinks
think that students have to study alone. First of all
because
, a student, trying to
learning learn something
individuallyon their own, is able to find the learning method more suitable for him. Everyone is different and this can contribute to increase
d self-confidence. An exam may be an
incredible chance to test self-abilities. If he fails, it would be a
n excellent precious occasion opportunity to understand his mistakes and to find another, more efficient, method
of learning. In my opinion
this is fundamental
in particular in the first years of school
in particular.
As far as I am concerned Personally, I prefer to study individually because sometimes
studying in groups
are is too confusing. It is not unusual that,
into in a group, only
a few
persons people really work and others do not proactively engage themselves. Nevertheless, to increase
a team
's working’s
working abilities is very important
, because those skills are actually
requested valued by companies and research teams.
**incredible chance
A better way to say this would a "valuable (or great) way". Chance implies "luck" is involved.
**precious means: characterized by feeling or showing fond affection for; "a cherished friend"; "children are precious"; "a treasured heirloom"
**commas in sentences
When I went to school I was taught that one way to know if a comma belongs is the sentence will still make sense if you remove the fragment of the sentence that you have commas around. That is why I removed the commas from this sentence:
In my opinion, this is fundamental, in particular in the first years of school. If you remove "this is fundamental" it seems like something is missing from the sentence. And if you add another comma after "in particular" it makes it too stilted or awkward.