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Side Effects Of The Internet

The Internet; computers have really changed my brain system (or 'function' might be better?). I don't mean that I'm becoming smarter. I mean that it makes my patience weaker. It decreases the amount of time I can focus for.
When I'm using the computer, a notification shows up at the bottom right that says I have a message from my friend. I then go to read it.
When I find an interesting sentence on a website, I go to another site to check it out, and again I find something else interesting and go to another site. Exactly I'm constantly browsing. It's like I'm playing a tune without my intention. I feel my mind is intrigued by another tune.
When I'm watching even my favourite movie on the net, a notification shows up and I stopped watching it for a while.
Recently I can't watch the movies for two hours straight. I can't focus on studying or reading for more than an hour. I used to be able to read for at least two hours. My conscious is like a yacht floating on the sea without a canvas. I want to blame the internet, not my age for this change.
How should I resolve the problem? Should I stop using a computer?

Well done, that's an interesting and relatable topic! If you have any questions about my corrections feel free to ask. 

What does it look like to have a dog?

When we were children we always asked our parents if we could get a dog, but our dream only came true when we became adults.
To keep a dog is like to having a baby; it takes all your time and all your thoughts - how to feed it, how to raise it, how to trim (What do you mean here? Trim their fur, perhaps?), and how to heal it when it's ill. It turns to a family member because it needs your love and care. You have to play with it every day! On the other hand/contrary, it gives you happiness and joy. It is the only creature on the Earth that's always happy to see you at any day of the week and at any hour, even at night. It always forgives you for your rudeness, your silence or nudges. It's naive and sometimes you are surprised by how much it trusts you.
Sometimes you look into its big devoted eyes and can't understand what does it needs. What does it want? I wish my dog were able to speak.
In general, to have a dog is a great happiness but also a great responsibility.

Please correct my daily 10 minutes of writing (#1)

Today I sent out an email to a Tanzanian tour operator who had organized my honeymoon last year.
I wanted to thank them for organizing a very pleasant tour and for the experience of their skilled guidance: Franco is a 50 years old Tanzanian guide who can speak Italian. With his driving skills (Tanzania is not well known for its highways), his knowledge of the African animals and his niceness he turned the safari day into a dream. I never thought that my childhood dream of seeing Serengeti National Park would come true one day, but that's what happened. I saw lions, hyenas, gazelles, leopards and elephants. They were all real and just at a dozen of metres from me. I don't think it's likely that I'd return there for it is a very expensive journey, but if I had the chance to go back to Africa, I would pack all my stuff up in a while in an instant to re-live that astonishing trip!
And that's why I tattooed an elephant on my forearm in the days following my return to Italy. I chose to have a black and white elephant done to always remember the breathlessness sensation of meeting such a wild, stout and regal beast.

(Well done on a good text! Just watch out for using 'come back' instead of 'return' or 'go back').