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Dreams
Next month I'll do 29 years old and I started think about my life and the dreams that I don't can realized yet.
In our life we passing very time living the dream of the others, making money to others people and leaving our dreams in second plan. This is very sad.
Next year I will be with 30 and I'm very far of the life that I'd like have.
I need money for keep me but I also need live my dreams to be happy.
Thinking about this all, I decided get out of the comfort zone and invest more time and energy in my projects that were stopped.
This text is a outburst but is also a message for all people that left their dreams die.
Get up and fight! The life isn't easy but We are strong. Peace and love!

Next month I'll be 29 years old and I've started to think about my life and the dreams I haven't achieved yet.
In our life, we pass time by living the dream of others, making money and leaving our dreams alone. This is very sad.
Next year I will be 30 and I am nowhere near achieving the goals I want to achieve.
I need money to live but I also need to live my dream to be happy.
Thinking about all this, I decided to leave my comfort zone and invest more of my time and energy into my dreams and goals that are on hold.
This text is an outburst but it is all a message for people who have left their dreams to die.
Get up and fight! Life isn't easy but we are strong! Peace and lots of love!
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October 24, 2017
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October 24, 2017
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October 24, 2017
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My day
Yesterday I started the day at my house. My mom made coffee and we have breakfast at the dining area. Then I came by bus with my friends to San Francisco to start my studies. 
When I arrived, I cooked Milanese with rice. For late I studied until seventeen hours. Afterwards I took a shower and then went to school at eighteen hours for five hours. I returned to my apartment later. I had to eat and finally I went to bed at once.


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Yesterday, I started the day at home, my mum made coffee and we had breakfast together in the dining room. Then I go the bus to San Fransisco with my friends to study. 
Quand I arrived, I cooked Milanese with rice. I studied late, until 5 o'clock. Afterwards, I had a shower and went to school, from 6 o'clock until 11 o'clock. I finally returned to my apartment, ate, and then went to bed.
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October 24, 2017
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October 24, 2017
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An Incident in the Office. So I was talking with a colleague who I share an office with, about some work-related issues, when I heard a faint voice calling my name. I thought that I misheard the voice, but the expression on my colleague's face told me that I was wrong. “Yes?” I answered tentatively. After that, the youngest colleague in our office jumped into our room and cried, “We found a super big dead cockroach at the door of the boss’s office!” (Well, our boss is always absorbed in his work and we don’t want to interrupt him, that’s why they called my name with such low voice.) The male colleague who sits in front of me was ready to help and so was I. I grabbed a piece of tissue from my desk and followed him. “Here we go,” said I, getting ready to pinch the cockroach with the tissue. The small creature made a move. “It’s not dead!” The girls cried again with terror I followed the orders of the male colleague and threw the cockroach from the balcony of the 13th floor. We watched the small thing fall onto the roof of a much lower building. I was quite sure it didn’t die because of the fall, our problem was solved.
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October 24, 2017
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Trying to speak english this summer with a British.
I was trying to speak english with a British from London and it was terrible, at first I didn't anderstand nothing perhaps when he talked to me I wasn't attentive and then I had to tell him if please "could you repeat please?" but when I wanted to response then my brain was empty, I was very nervous so then my sister responsed. I know the best way to anderstand the english language is speaking a lot and lost the fear and I believe if I had more confident in myself I could speak english better than I speak now, It is certain too that I need more vocabulary

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Trying to speak English the summer with a Brit.
I was trying to speak English with a Brit from London and it was terrible, at first, I didn't understand anything, maybe when he was talking to me I wasn't listening properly and I had to ask him to repeat himself. When I wanted to respond my brain was empty because I was so nervous, so my sister replied instead. I know the best way to understand English is to try and speak it more often and lose the fear. I believe if I had more confidence I could speak better English than I currently do. It is clear I need a wider vocabulary.
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September 13, 2017
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Practice 1
Dear friends,
How are you today? I'm already going home. I'm writing this letter to show my appreciation.

I'm feeling good. In addition, you are helping me to learn English. Last, welcome to my college at Beijing Y University. There have interesting courses and beautiful views.
Yours truly,
LiMing
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September 13, 2017
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Hi, there

Could you please help me with theee questions? Please!

1) Do you say "This is a photo of my wife and me" or "of me and my wife"? And "This photo belongs to me and my wife or my wife and me?

On a website I read "Today is John, Catherine's and my last day of school." .. Does it sound odd to say "Today is the last day of school of John, Catherine's and mine"

2) Do you say "This happened in the whole/in all US or in the whole of the US/In all of the US"?

3) Does it sound odd to say "This sentence isn't perfect, but it only just passes." "It is (only) Just acceptable" "It is just (barely) acceptable"?

Please! I really need your help

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1 This is a photo of me and my wife
Today is the last day of school for me, John and Catherine
2 This happened all of the US
3 This sentence isn't perfect but it is acceptable

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September 13, 2017
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My diet life 2
It's has been 2 months, since I try to lose my weight. I lose about 3 kilograms(about 6.6 pounds).
I was amazed at how slow it's and I felt disappointment. Therefor, I did a lot of study.It's like an Elephant in the room. I have to do more high intensity exercise. So I start to do sport forcefully. I hope it's work.

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My diet life 2
It's has been 2 months, since I have tried to lose weight. I lost about 3 kilograms(about 6.6 pounds).
I was amazed at how slow it has been and I felt disappointed. Therefore, I did a lot of studying.It's like an elephant in the room. I have to do more high-intensity exercise. So I am starting to do sport forcefully. I hope it works.
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September 13, 2017
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