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Kerry Mao
My diet life 2 It's has been 2 months, since I try to lose my weight. I lose about 3 kilograms(about 6.6 pounds). I was amazed at how slow it's and I felt disappointment. Therefor, I did a lot of study.It's like an Elephant in the room. I have to do more high intensity exercise. So I start to do sport forcefully. I hope it's work.

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My diet life 2

It's has been 2 months, since I try to lose my weight. I lose about 3 kilograms(about 6.6 pounds).
I was amazed at how slow it's and I felt disappointment. Therefor, I did a lot of study.It's like an Elephant in the room. I have to do more high intensity exercise. So I start to do sport forcefully. I hope it's work.

It's has been 2 months, since I try to lose my weight. I have been trying to lose weight for 2 months.I lose have lost about 3 kilograms (about 6.6 pounds).
I'm amazed at how slow it's  been and I felt disappointment I'm (feeling) disappointed . Therefore, I did a lot of study I have been studying a lot.It's like there is an elephant in the room. I have to do more high intensity exercise more intensively. So Therefore I start to do sport forcefully have started to train harder, with sporting activities. I hope it's  it will work.

Good job with the original. Keep up the good work. Just be mindful with tenses, I know this is not easy :)

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My diet life 2

It's has been 2 months, since I try to lose my weight. I lose about 3 kilograms(about 6.6 pounds).
I was amazed at how slow it's and I felt disappointment. Therefor, I did a lot of study.It's like an Elephant in the room. I have to do more high intensity exercise. So I start to do sport forcefully. I hope it's work.


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My diet life 2

It's has been 2 months, since I have tried to lose weight. I lost about 3 kilograms(about 6.6 pounds).
I was amazed at how slow it has been and I felt disappointed. Therefore, I did a lot of studying.It's like an elephant in the room. I have to do more high-intensity exercise. So I am starting to do sport forcefully. I hope it works.

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My diet life 2

It's has been 2 months, since I try to lose my weight. I lose about 3 kilograms(about 6.6 pounds).
I was amazed at how slow it's and I felt disappointment. Therefor, I did a lot of study.It's like an Elephant in the room. I have to do more high intensity exercise. So I start to do sport forcefully. I hope it's work.

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My Diet Life 2

It's been 2 months that I've been trying to lose weight. I've lost about 3 kilograms(about 6.6 pounds) so far.
I'm surprised at how slow it's been so I'm disappointed. I've also been studying a lot. However, I need to do more high intensity exercise. So I'm going  start doing sports more seriously. I hope it'll work.


*** I took out the phrase "It's like an elephant in the room" because I wasn't sure if you knew the double meaning of it. "The elephant in the room" is an idiom in English for something very obvious that no one wants to discuss. You may have been using it that way, but I just wasn't sure so I thought I should explain. :-) 

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