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I tried to quit smoking so many times and failed.
I was frustrated and dispaired despairing. I thought I had a the will power to quit smoking but I couldn't.
I was thinking and thinking: "What's the problem?"
I searched for the info of stop information on stopping smoking and got the a clue and shocking news.
The more knowing I found out about the cigarettes, the more getting worry worried I became.
I cannot believe that there is are so many toxic materials in cigarettes that cause to various various kinds of cancer in cigarettes.
It seemed to me that the company was evil. The company makes the cigarettes very addictive so the that people cannot quit smoking easily. The nNicotine is way much more addictive than heroin.
I wish I would could get out of the this hell and I was struggling to quit it desperately but only to became more depressed.
Some guys easily quit smoking easily, and I don't couldn't understand how they can could. I just envied them and considered them special. So I gave up the mission.
A few years ago my father died from cancer. My father was in the hospital for a month but unfortunately he never left a will. That broked my heart.
Suddenly I thought upon about the story that my father told me: " You'd better quit smoking."
So I took the words as his will.
Strangely to say after that I can could quit smoking totally.
I wouldn't wanted be a good boy to my father so I might want to could show my respect to him as that way.
Strong motivation could change the world.
I'd like to thank you again, my lovable father and give him you a rest in peace peaceful rest in heaven.0 votedSeptember 6, 20170- 신학기. . . 오늘 신학기가 시작했다. 새로운 1학년 학생들이 왔다. 금년은 새로운 학급은 곤란한 학급이라서 나는 내가 경험 있는 교사를 기쁜다 / 나는 내가 경험 풍부한 교사를 기쁜다. (Which is better?) 금년은 새로운 학급은 곤란한 학급이라서, 나는 내가 경험 교사를 되어서 기쁜다. (Or is this better?) 오늘은 바쁘지만 좋았다 나는 교사이자 지도 상담자라서 이번주에는 아주 바쁠 거이다. 내가 학생들에게 강의를 바꾸고 싶은 학생들을 조언한다. Today, the new semester began. New Grade 9 students came. This year's Grade 9 class is a difficult class, so I am glad I am an experienced teacher. Today was busy but good. I am both a teacher and a guidance counsellor, so this week is very busy for me. I advise students who want to change classes.September 5, 201730
- 캠핑 이야기 내가 어렸을 때 여름마다 우리 가족은 캠핑을 갔다. 자주 주의 공원에 갔었다. 공원은 소나무가 많이 있고 큰 호수를 옆에 있다. 가끔 은 매미가 있고 가끔은 "텐트" 애벌레가 있었다 자주 하이킹을 가고 사슴을 봤다. 한 여름은 미국너구리가 우리 어머니 옆에서 마시멜로 가방을 도둑질했고 그것을 나무 위로 운반하려고 했다. 가방이 거꾸로 있서 거의 모든 마시멜로들이 떨어졌다. 꽤 우스웠다. When I was growing up, we went camping every summer. We often went to a provincial park. This park has a lot of pine trees and is beside a large lake. Some summers there were cicadas, other summers there were tent caterpillars. Often we went for hikes and saw deer. One summer a raccoon stole a bag of marshmallows from beside my mother and tried to take it up a tree. Almost all the marshmallows fell out, since the bag was upside down. It was pretty funny.September 4, 201730
Writing practice 2. <about future=""></about>
The Ffuture is going to be really excited things very exciting.
Artificial intelligent intelligence and Block chain technology are going to be core central.
Most parts areas of our lives was will be helped by AI. [Or perhaps you mean that our lives already are helped by AI?]
It will be more comfortable and more lazyful we will have more leisure.
And block chain is going to change our the boundary boundaries that remain seperate separate in our world.
The world is going to be integrated.
HumanHumanity is going to be more liberal [I am not sure exactly what you mean here: perhaps "free"? As in free from labour?]. But people will experience less reality.Some very interesting ideas here. (I had not heard about block chain technology before.) Just a few vocabulary and tense changes were needed.
0 votedSeptember 3, 20171
My college life has focused on working with others as a team.The rest of your sentences are in the past tense so it is better to drop the "has" here. Another possible way to write this sentence is: "My college life taught me about working with other people on (or "as") a team."
College courses required me to work with a team on class projects.
I had many chances to make films or records the music with my team.
"Record" is the past tense. You are using "music" here more generally, rather than discussing a specific piece of music, so it does not need the article "the" in front.
I learned how a team of different people communicates one another and how they handle stress with humor."Team" is singular, so the verb which goes with it must agree. Prepositional phrases like "of different people" should be ignored when deciding how to conjugate the verb. People communicate, but a team communicates. "People" is plural, while "team" is singular.
The "they" I highlighted is grammatically incorrect, even though many native English speakers commonly would use it this way as well. The pronoun "they" is referring back to "people"; however, it should actually be referring back to "team" in the previous phrase. "Team" is the main noun of the phrase and is singular, so the pronoun must also be singular. It would be more correct to write ... "and how it handles stress with humour," since a team is singular and does not have a gender. However, since we are talking about people, using "it" feels wrong. I would probably write "and how people handle stress with humour" and avoid that problem.
0 votedSeptember 2, 20171Fall has come here in Korea
Fall's already here in Korea.
Actually it's colder than you might think, almost like mid-September. It is so [or very] unusual.[Usually ellipsis marks come in sets of three with a space between each, for example . . . In this case, you don't really need ellipsis marks (they usually indicate that something has been left out or is implied, but an exclamation point (!) could be used to show emphasis and surprise if you like.]
The weather center doesn't know why it's unusually chilly this year.
So, if anyone's headed to Korea soon, make sure you packed enough warm clothes.I've corrected some of the same things as Mr. Zhang did (he pointed out some excellent changes if you want to be more formal), but did not correct others. Some of your phrasing is perfectly acceptable in a casual conversation, though it might not be if you were writing a more formal essay or report. Since your topic is more informal "small talk," you can use more casual vocabulary and it actually sounds more natural to do so.
Make sure you check that you have included capitals where they are necessary and have the correct punctuation in your sentence. It will help to keep your ideas clear and accurate.
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