Writing practice 2. <About future>
Future is going to be really excited things.
Artificial intelligent and Block chain technology are going to be core.
Most parts of our lives was helped by AI.
It will be more comfortable and more lazyful.
And block chain is going to change our boundary that remain seperate our world.
The world is going to be integrate.
Human is going to be more liberal. But people will experience less reality.
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Writing practice 2.
Artificial intelligent intelligence and Block chain technology are going to be core central.
Most parts areas of our lives was will be helped by AI. [Or perhaps you mean that our lives already are helped by AI?]
It will be more comfortable and more lazyful we will have more leisure.
And block chain is going to change our the boundary boundaries that remain seperate separate in our world.
The world is going to be integrated.
HumanHumanity is going to be more liberal [I am not sure exactly what you mean here: perhaps "free"? As in free from labour?]. But people will experience less reality.
Some very interesting ideas here. (I had not heard about block chain technology before.) Just a few vocabulary and tense changes were needed.
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