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My name is Nayara. I am Brazilian but I lived in Canada for almost two years. However, since I came back to Brazil I feel I'm losing the fluency in english I got there, and I'd like to keep practicing and find some friends at the same time!
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    Ivan Aivazovsky

    Ivan Aivazovsky é  (foi, as he is dead, we talk about him in the past) um pintor russo famoso. Ele é (Same as last marinista e gostou gostava (gostava is a better term here. It is similar to "He used to like". You are talking about something he did often while alive) pintar o mar. Ivan nasceu na Feodosia na Criméia na uma (when we have two prepositions togeter we use another preposition that is a sum of the other two. In these case it would be "em uma") família do mercador. Ele foi era(Foi era is redundant. In this case era is a better option)  muito talentoso. Quando Ivan era criança, ele ensinar tocar violino mesmo(Aprendeu a tocar violino sozinho. In portuguese you don't teach yourself, you learn by yourself). Ele estudou na academia de arte alguns anos, depois vai(Foi, past tense) para Itália. Lá melhorou mestrias dele. Também ele (Ele também. Subject comes first) pintou as paisagemes e os retrato. As pinturas dele são en os museus deferentes. A maioria é no Museu Russo em São Petersburgo. As exposição de pinturas dele são organizados nas cidades diferentes. A maior pintura dele é "Vagalhão nono" e è no Museu Russo. Há gentes depois o naufrágio são representados. Eles tentaram salvar no mar depois uma procela.


    You are doing great! Some times you mixed up times like present and past, but continue learning!

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    Paragraph of a story The creature took a deep breath of the dry air and looked at his hurt arm. The wound had healed. The fur was impregnated with blood, but there was not even a scar. He stood up. One more time the reindeers trampled the ground, a loud bleat leaving their mouths. A calling for help. A gruesome laughter left the monster-Santa mouth and the reindeers retreated, shrinking against the sled, looking for a place to hide. The creature look around, seeing the frightened animals, but it quickly ignored them when he found the bag left in the ground. He took it, throwing all the gifts to the floor. One of his hands with long nails looked in the pockets of the ripped off coat he was still wearing until they found a piece of paper.
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    O meu curta filme curto novo: Just As You Are  (In this case "curta" means short film)

    O meu filme novo é chamado "Just Like You Are". Este filme é sobre uma médica insegura, consciente de si mesma que mora   vive  uma mentira com o marido negligente dela.(Morar means inhabit. Vive, although it can means inhabit, it also means simply live. "Living a lie"/  You can also say "Vive uma mentira com seu marido negligente" where "seu" is possessive pronoun.) Enquanto vai passa  ("Vai" means going to a place in this case. Passa, in this case, means going trough)pelo processo de obtenção de implantes mamários, para impressionar o marido  (can be replaced with "seu marido"), o paciente jovem dela faz um passe para ela  Um de seus pacientes jovens começa a demonstrar interesse por ela. (Demonstrar interesse: To show he is interested. To flirt). Depois de alguma hesitação, ela permite os avanços dele e começa a gostar dele muito (Can be replaced with: Gostar muito dele. When we like a person in a romantic way we say "apaixonar" which means "fall in love with". It could be said: "e começa a se apaixonar por ele), apesar de ser serem (plural form) tão diferentes um do outro. No entanto, as coisas começam um  a se desvendar para ela na maneiras de maneira que a obrigam a enfrentar suas fraquezas.

    Se gostar de  da   ideia pelo  do filme (ideia it is a feminine word.), visitar visite(imperative) o Facebook dedo(masculine) filme e curtircurta: https://www.facebook.com/justasyouareshort
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    Tomar café

    Hoje eu fui ao café (If you are referring to a coffee shop you can say: Hoje eu fui ao café (NAME OF THE PLACE) )

    Sabia muito bem, eSSe café é do Brazil. (Use the double s, otherwise it sound like z./ "É" and not "E". "E" its like "and")

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