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    there are  Is there someone who can help me with this tasks? (toefl integreted task)

    Both an author and speaker talk about global warming and the effects of the rising of the temperatures because of the human activities such a resulting high levels of CO2.
    The author explains that human activities had have influenced the global temperature which is has been rising in the last recent years. The earth is getting warmer, and it is has been discovered that there is a relationship between the rising of the temperatures and the rising level of carbon dioxide. For this reasons, there will be a lot of changes in our world. First, the weather will be conditioned from the different temperature. Secondly, some industry sectors could be affected, like agricultural and transportation sectors.
    The speakers talks about the same subject, but he explains how this phenomena will influence the economy of tourism in the winter. He mentions how the temperatures are have been rising in the last recent years in the north-east of the USA and how it could bring to an economic disaster of for the skiing centre. The heat will decrease the days of snowing snow days in winter, and because of that the skiing centre will have less tourists and the necessity of using the will need to use artificial snow, which will increase the costs. Also hotels, restaurants, and other services in those areas will have less clients, this mean which means less revenues and more problems.


    Note: highlighted sentence is a passive sentence, it is preferable to transform it to an active sentence by rearranging the word order and indicating WHO is doing the action; i.e. "so-and-so discovered that..."

    Second highlight is unclear word usage.  What are you trying to say here?  You cannot say that weather will be "conditioned."  

    Third highlight: centre is British English, center is American English (not sure which you are studying)

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    September 16, 2017
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  • Answered
    Yes, you are correct. "It looks like snow" is a predictive statement that means it is not snowing now but the signs in the sky and weather patterns make it appear that snow will come soon. Usually when the clouds are gray and full and the weather is below freezing, people predict a snowfall with the words "it looks like snow."
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    August 22, 2017
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    -He said he wasn't going to make a decision on the basis of the final review of the report. He also added that he'd rather step down instead of vouching  rather than vouch for the company.


    I definitely vote for the second one.  Everything is correct: 
    -A friend of mine has an upscale summer house near the city. It has a clean swimming pool and a huge garden.


    Best wishes!

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    August 21, 2017
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  • Corrected

    A short dialogue...

    For the first time, Matt thought that maybe he should have remained at home that night. But actually, he thought that it would have been better if Michelle had remained at home. ''Mum,'' he said, unsure (if he should speak/of himself/of what she would say). His mum, Adele, was looking for her wallet in the bag. ''Yes?'' she replied. Matt inhaled quickly and asked, "Does Michelle really have to come to the party?" Suddenly Adele froze in place as she stared into her son's eyes. The cashier observed the scene without paying attention. Matt's cheeks became hot, ready to receive a slap that never came. ''For sure she will come,'' his mother simply said, and the discussion ended there.
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    August 21, 2017
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  • Posted
    Syrian Dialect Vocabulary I need to make a health presentation in a few days to a group of Syrian refugees and just want to check to make sure a few of these words are appropriate for Syrian dialect: 1) To drown: يغرف 2) Covered/covering: تغطية/مغطى 3) Studies Show: ??? الدرسات يفرشو??? 4) To touch: يلمس Thank you for your help! :-)
    August 21, 2017
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