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For the first time Matt thought that maybe he should have remained at home that night/ that maybe it would have been better to remain at home that night. But actually, he thought that it would have been better, if Michelle had remained at home. ''Mum'' he said unsure. His mum, Adele, was looking for her wallet in the bag. ''Yes?'' she said. Matt got some air/ breathed in and asked: "Does Michelle really have to come to the party?" Suddenly Adele was immobile ( Can I say ''got frozen''?) and she stared into her son's eyes. The cashier observed the scene without paying attention. Matt's cheeks got warmed up/ got heated, ready to receive a slap that never came. ''Sure she comes'' his mother just said and the discussion ended there.
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A short dialogue...
For the first time, Matt thought that maybe he should have remained at home that night. But actually, he thought that it would have been better if Michelle had remained at home. ''Mum,'' he said, unsure (if he should speak/of himself/of what she would say). His mum, Adele, was looking for her wallet in the bag. ''Yes?'' she replied. Matt inhaled quickly and asked, "Does Michelle really have to come to the party?" Suddenly Adele froze in place as she stared into her son's eyes. The cashier observed the scene without paying attention. Matt's cheeks became hot, ready to receive a slap that never came. ''For sure she will come,'' his mother simply said, and the discussion ended there.Want to progress faster?
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