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Hi,i am a chinese teacher who teach forginers chinese in a university at shanghai,i've been teaching for many years and have a lot of experience. if u want to study chinese and looking for a tutor,free free to contact me.i will try my best to help u.

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Two short questions please
1_What is the difference between 县and 国家？ country
'县” is a very small city.inChina firstis国家（country）----省（province）------市（city）-------县（smaller city）
2_I have heard the structure of 得is :
Verb + 得＋adverb
In this Chinese sentence I can't see adverb after 得，could you please tell me why?
儿子被冻得大哭。

nope,the structure should be Verb+得+adj（or other elements） not adverb
她写得很好。
我说得不错。
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March 6, 2017
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中文写作练习
我以前去过香港，有时候想起太平山。从(没有"从）那里的景色我千万不能忘掉（很难忘）了，因为特别（是））晚上好几座楼照亮城市。日本人中（管）这样的夜色英语叫 ”Million-dollar night view”。我非常感动地享受了那么美丽的夜色，感觉了（没有了））旅游会让人们平衡身心而且愉悦精神。
可是，我还没去过其他的有名城市，例如上海，北京，深圳等等。因为中国（是）一个幅员广大（很大）的国家，所以不会（不能）去看所有城市…还是想要去尽可能多城市吃正宗的中餐。我非常喜欢麻婆豆腐。哈哈。你们有建议的城市吗？

来上海吧，上海欢迎你！
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March 6, 2017
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我住在上海，觉得上海对外国人来说更舒服。所以我推荐上海。
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March 6, 2017
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they are same,just different people use different ones,and if you say"虽然....但是”norally is 但是。formeaning are same.
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March 6, 2017
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为你有的句
既然我的每日的生活很没有意思，很惨，我尝试写例子的句。（造句is better,means make sentences)

因为我的猫抓着我的脚，所以我不得不提起他上膝上。(use"把 is better here.所以我不得不把它抱到我腿上。your sentence is not wrong,just not chinese way.this is like chinese people's sentence.
Because the cat is scratching my leg, I have no choice but to lift him up on to my lap.

我看见照片的内容的动物的时候，我不由得想可爱。(我看见有动物的图片时，我不由得觉得他们很可爱）
When I see pictures containing animals, I can't help but think they are cute.

为经济的健康，政府不得不卖武器。（为了经济的健康发展。）
For the health of the economy, the government had no choice but to sell weapons.

除非我说话题别的猫，否则你想我很简单。（除非我聊猫以外的话题，否则你觉得我很简单，）
Unless I talk about something other than cats, you will think I am simple.

我的喉咙疼。我想我差一点病。（我想我快要病了。快要...了is a structure means something going to happen soon)
My throat hurts. I think I am on the verge of being sick.

我希望趁写这个文字的机会把我的语法校正。(我希望趁着写句子的机会纠正我的语法）
I hope to take the opportunity of writing this to get my grammar corrected.

对其余天来说我们有一个去看电影的计划。（今天剩下的时间，我们打算去看电影。）
As for the rest of the day, we have a plan to go to the movies.

hope it will be helpful for you,any questions feel free to ask me.

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March 5, 2017
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今年夏天你打算去哪儿？
我是学生，我有钱有得少，(我的钱不多）所以我不能去中国或者亚洲旅行。今年夏天我打算去莫斯科州。那里有很有名的音乐会演。在这个会演有很多流行的摇滚乐团，值得去看看。我要省钱，因为下月我要买漂（票）。这个会演有几个特点，例如：我到了的时候，我不可以离开这个地方、我要带我的护照、我不可以带一机（个）照相机等等。我觉得这个旅行的精盐（经历）将很有意思的。
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March 5, 2017
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你留在哪的宾馆？ - What hotel are you staying at?(你住在哪个宾馆）
（explanation:we use"住“to mean stay here)

那个宾馆在哪儿？ - Where is that hotel?

今天你喝了五杯咖啡！ - you have drunk five cups of coffee today! (Btw, how can I write properly "This is your fifth cup today!"?)
（这是你今天的第五杯咖啡。means this is your fifth cup today)

请从我。 - Please, follow me.(请跟我+Verb)
(explanation:follow me the chinese structure is 请跟我+verb,for example,follow me to read,in chinese is "请跟我读。"

你去从你家妈？ - Are you going from your home?(你从家走吗？）
（explanation:the difference between "去"and"走“ ：去means you go somewhere, 走means you leave somewhere.)

一个很长的天。 - A long day （Do I need a measure word here? and what is the correct one for 天? I'm not sure I can find it）
(天 don't need measure word.you should say"很长的一天）

她住在这里住很长。 - She lives here for a long time.（她住在这里很长时间了。）
（explanation:很长 meansvery long for length,很长时间 means long time)

我们留这家宾馆，好不好？ - We'll stay at this hotel, ok?(我们住这家宾馆，好不好）（same reason as sentence1)

这座山和那座山，什么更高？ - What is higher, this or that mountain?(哪个更高）
（explanation:哪个means which one ,when you have options,"个” can be other measure words depending on what objects you are talking about)

他的工作的时候太长。 - His work day is too long.(他每天工作时间太长了）

我有过很长梦。 - I had a long dream.（我做了很长时间梦）?(你住在哪个宾馆）（explanation:we use"住“to mean stay here)
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March 5, 2017
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我周末常常写作文
今天三月四号。三月八号快就来（三月八号就要来了。”就要...了“is a structure means something going to happen soon)。这是姑娘的节（妇女节 we have a name for it,this is the correct one to call it in chinese)！我妈妈给我的哈萨克文学老师买了一个礼物。这惊喜（这礼物 instead of 这惊喜）又好看又不太贵。我觉得三月八号我的哈萨克文学老师的感（skip 感到）心情很愉快。
我的同学们都买了给姑娘花（just 花will be better)。因为现在很多超市的东西减价。
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March 5, 2017
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對話4 duei hua sih
A: 你工作什麼？ni gong zuo shen me?(noramly we say"你做什么工作？“ ni zuo shenme gongzuo?)
B: 我工作是紀錄安排。wo gong zuo shi ji lu an pai.
A: 你東西什麼紀錄安排？ni dong si shen me ji lu an pai?(should be"ni julu anpai shenme dongxi?)
B: 會議，產品，活動，和費(yong)。huei yi, chan pin, huo dong, han fei(yong).
A: 你工作多长時間？ ni gong zuo duo chang shih jian?
B: 自小孩。zih siao hai.(xiaoshihou kaishi)
A: 為甚麼你小孩(xiaoshihou instead of xiaohai)工作？ wei shen me ni siao hai gong zuo?
B: 是我爺爺奶奶公司。shih wo ye ye nai nai gong sih.
A: 你小孩(xiaoshihou)工作什麼？ni siao hai gong zuo shen me?
B: 打掃店，架子安排，和算錢。 da sao dian, jia zih an pai, han suan cian.
A: 你多歲9？ni duo suei?(niduoda instead of niduosui)
B: 七歲。ci suei.
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March 5, 2017
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对不起，我也没听说过。
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October 28, 2009
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