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Chinese words order 3 大家好! Please help me to improve the sentences below. I'm trying to implement some new vocabulary and continue to exercising words order. Thanks A LOT! 非常感谢 :) 你留在哪的宾馆? - What hotel are you staying at? 那个宾馆在哪儿? - Where is that hotel? 今天你喝了五杯咖啡! - you have drunk five cups of coffee today! (Btw, how can I write properly "This is your fifth cup today!"?) 请从我。 - Please, follow me. 你去从你家妈? - Are you going from your home? 一个很长的天。 - A long day (Do I need a measure word here? and what is the correct one for 天? I'm not sure I can find it) 她住在这里住很长。 - She lives here for a long time. 我们留这家宾馆,好不好? - We'll stay at this hotel, ok? 这座山和那座山,什么更高? - What is higher, this or that mountain? 他的工作的时候太长。 - His work day is too long. 我有过很长梦。 - I had a long dream.

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Chinese words order 3

大家好! Please help me to improve the sentences below. I'm trying to implement some new vocabulary and continue to exercising words order.

Thanks A LOT! 非常感谢 :)

你留在哪的宾馆? - What hotel are you staying at?

你住在哪个宾馆?

那个宾馆在哪儿? - Where is that hotel?

今天你喝了五杯咖啡! - you have drunk five cups of coffee today! (Btw, how can I write properly "This is your fifth cup today!"?)

请从我。 - Please, follow me.
请跟着我来 。


你去从你家妈? - Are you going from your home?
it's a wrong expression. You should be change as follow.

你从你家去吗?


一个很长的天。 - A long day (Do I need a measure word here? and what is the correct one for 天? I'm not sure I can find it)

If you would like more better for your sentence.

, you could change that. 漫长的一天。


她住在这里住很长。 - She lives here for a long time.

她住在这里很久了。


我们留这家宾馆,好不好? - We'll stay at this hotel, ok?
住


这座山和那座山,什么更高? - What is higher, this or that mountain?
哪一座更高?

Chinese more likely repetition.


他的工作的时候太长。 - His work day is too long.
工作的时间太长


我有过很长梦。 - I had a long dream.

Because Iam not so sure about what you want to expression, so I would like to provide two sentence, which is different expression way.

我有过很长的一段梦 or 我有一个一直以来的梦想。

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Chinese words order 3

大家好! Please help me to improve the sentences below. I'm trying to implement some new vocabulary and continue to exercising words order.

Thanks A LOT! 非常感谢 :)

你留住在哪的哪家宾馆? - What hotel are you staying at?

那个宾馆在哪儿? - Where is that hotel?

今天你喝了五杯咖啡! - you have drunk five cups of coffee today! (Btw, how can I write properly "This is your fifth cup today!"?)

这是你今天喝的第五杯咖啡 This is your fifth cup today

请从跟着我。 - Please, follow me.

你去从你家出发/去妈吗? - Are you going from your home?

一个很长的一天。 - A long day (Do I need a measure word here? and what is the correct one for 天? I'm not sure I can find it)

---- I thought for a while and decided we don't use a measure word for 天, at least not when it means "day".

她住在这里住很长很久了/很长时间了。 - She lives here for a long time.

I'd prefer to use "久".

我们留住这家宾馆,好不好? - We'll stay at this hotel, ok?

这座山和那座山,什么哪一个更高? - What is higher, this or that mountain?

他的工作的时候时间太长。 - His work day is too long.

我有过做了一个很长的梦。 - I had a long dream.

做梦. No other verb is possible.

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你留在哪的宾馆? - What hotel are you staying at?(你住在哪个宾馆)

(explanation:we use"住“to mean stay here)

那个宾馆在哪儿? - Where is that hotel?

今天你喝了五杯咖啡! - you have drunk five cups of coffee today! (Btw, how can I write properly "This is your fifth cup today!"?)

(这是你今天的第五杯咖啡。means this is your fifth cup today)

请从我。 - Please, follow me.(请跟我+Verb)

(explanation:follow me the chinese structure is 请跟我+verb,for example,follow me to read,in chinese is "请跟我读。"

你去从你家妈? - Are you going from your home?(你从家走吗?)

(explanation:the difference between "去"and"走“ :去means you go somewhere, 走means you leave somewhere.)

一个很长的天。 - A long day (Do I need a measure word here? and what is the correct one for 天? I'm not sure I can find it)

(天 don't need measure word.you should say"很长的一天)

她住在这里住很长。 - She lives here for a long time.(她住在这里很长时间了。)

(explanation:很长 meansvery long for length,很长时间 means long time)

我们留这家宾馆,好不好? - We'll stay at this hotel, ok?(我们住这家宾馆,好不好)(same reason as sentence1)



这座山和那座山,什么更高? - What is higher, this or that mountain?(哪个更高)

(explanation:哪个means which one ,when you have options,"个” can be other measure words depending on what objects you are talking about)

他的工作的时候太长。 - His work day is too long.(他每天工作时间太长了)

我有过很长梦。 - I had a long dream.(我做了很长时间梦)?(你住在哪个宾馆) (explanation:we use"住“to mean stay here)

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Chinese words order 3

大家好! Please help me to improve the sentences below. I'm trying to implement some new vocabulary and continue to exercising words order.

Thanks A LOT! 非常感谢 :)

你 留 住 在哪 的 家宾馆? - What hotel are you staying at?

那个宾馆在哪儿? - Where is that hotel?

今天你喝了五杯咖啡!is right.but  你已经喝了五杯咖啡 is better(这是你今天喝的第五杯咖啡了!)- you have drunk five cups of coffee today! (Btw, how can I write properly "This is your fifth cup today!"?)

请 从 跟着/追随我。 - Please, follow me.

你 去 从你家 出发/去 妈 吗? - Are you going from your home?

一个很长/漫长的一天。 - A long day (Do I need a measure word here? and what is the correct one for 天? I'm not sure I can find it)

她住在这里 住很长时间了。 - She lives here for a long time.

我们留 住这家宾馆,好不好? - We'll stay at this hotel, ok?

这座山和那座山,什么 哪个更高? - What is higher, this or that mountain?

他的工作的时候 时间 太长。 - His work day is too long.

我有过 做了一个很长的梦。 - I had a long dream.
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Chinese words order 3

大家好! Please help me to improve the sentences below. I'm trying to implement some new vocabulary and continue to exercising words order.

Thanks A LOT! 非常感谢 :)

你留在哪的宾馆(你住在哪个宾馆)? - What hotel are you staying at?

那个宾馆在哪儿? - Where is that hotel?

今天你喝了五杯咖啡! - you have drunk five cups of coffee today! (Btw, how can I write properly "This is your fifth cup today!"?(这是你的第五杯咖啡了)

请从我。(跟着我) - Please, follow me.

你去从你家妈?(你回家吗(that I not sure)) - Are you going from your home?

一个很长的天(很长的一天)。 - A long day (Do I need a measure word here? and what is the correct one for 天? I'm not sure I can find it)

她住在这里住很长(她住在这里很久了)。 - She lives here for a long time.

我们留(住)这家宾馆,好不好? - We'll stay at this hotel, ok?

这座山和那座山,什么更高?(这座山和那座山比,哪座更高) - What is higher, this or that mountain?

他的工作的时候太长了。 - His work day is too long.

我有过很长梦。(我做过一个很长的梦) - I had a long dream.

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