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Beautiful morning
I am traveling now for my studying. I usually take <strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">a</font></strike> the subway. <font style="background-color: yellow;">When it has passed outside morning sunshine has come through the window</font>. Sunshine is not strong. it just made all things beautiful.Hi there, it sound beautiful :-) However, The yellow sentence is very difficult to understand :-(
0 votedFebruary 26, 20180- To be honest, from the example sentence I understood the opposite of what you want. I think "The world is getting worse every day" is actually fine :-) Or if you wanted to sound a bit more natural you could say "The world just keeps getting worse and worse". Something like that :-D0 votedFebruary 20, 20180
- "Moon view" is not a common phrase. But I guess it means "a view of the moon", i.e. "being able to see the moon". On the other hand, "lunar landscape" IS a common phrase but it sounds scientific because it sounds like you are studying the landscape of the moon e.g. making a map of the moon. It also sounds like you might be ON the moon. In conclusion, they are not the same :-)0 votedOctober 17, 20170
Hi there,
This is an interesting topic. I love reading books...but to be honest, in most cases I prefer the movies :-p What about you?
Read or Watch?
It is common to have best-selling novels to be turned (BUT, actually a more natural construction would be "It is common for best-selling novels to be turned...") into blockbusters movies, such as Harry Potter, The Twilight Saga, The Lord of the Rings, The Notebook, Forest Gump, Green Mile, etc.
People always dabate debate on which conveys the story better: the novel or the movie. Movie-lovers insist that watching movies not only safe saves time but also gives the audience a more realistic feeling. On the other hand, book-lovers claim reading novels can know provides/offers/gives more details about the story, and have more imaginations stimulates the reader's imagination more.0 votedOctober 1, 20170"She bit me for a new fur coat" - "bit", what do you mean by this?
"We drive<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">r</font></strike> to supermarket.""You <font style="background-color: yellow;">had</font> a tape recorder with you"
"Why don't you <strike>has</strike> clean out your handbag<font style="background-color: yellow;">?"</font>
"These two girls bought many handbag<font style="background-color: yellow;">s"</font>
"I want to eat these grape<font style="background-color: yellow;">s"</font>
It is good <font style="background-color: yellow;">for you </font>to eat grape<font style="background-color: yellow;">s"</font>Everything else was perfect. Well done!
0 votedAugust 20, 20170Correction part 2:
On other hand, there are some disadvantages about studying abroad. The main point would be missing family support and experiencing homesickness. However, as was said before, the internet can be a useful tool for solving this problem by shortening physical distance between people. Secondly, the beginning can be a little tough and stressful especially if the student doesn’t have a reasonable familiarity with in the foreign language. Persistence and willpower would be the main points to work in this case and, what's more, the support of teachers and classmates is very important.
Although there are some disadvantages to studying in a different country, they can be easily solved if faced with maturity and if the student is conscious of the positive acquisitions after the experience. As a result, I feel that the advantages of this development can outweigh the disadvantages
0 votedAugust 16, 20170Correction part 1: This is actually a well-constructed essay. The paragraph structure is good and your argument is easy to understand. In addition you are trying to use more advanced language and grammar structures (which is recommended) but sometimes the sentence doesn't sound natural. As a result, many of my corrections are reformulations of the sentence to make it sound more natural. I hope this helps!
Well done! :-)
Education is the fundamental point for the development of a community. Without it the world would still be facing many diseases, battles, or could be stagnant because of/due to/owing to lack of technology. In many cases, the region where someone is living doesn’t have a good education system , making it necessary to look for opportunities to study abroad. In the past, that was much more difficult, but nowadays things are different. With the transportation and communication systems growth, living in another place is much easier.
Those facts have helped some people achieve their dreams to studying abroad and those students have a lot to gain for the future. Studying in another country can be challenging, but there are a lot of advantages of it. Firstly, students will experience independence which can increase their confidence and self-assurance. Hence they would be better prepared for a more challenging situations later in life, for example in their job. Secondly, they can experience cultural differences turning themselves into more flexible, peaceful, and tolerant people. Finally, of course, looking for study in some other place is positive because it helps spread knowledge, which is essential for world development.
0 votedAugust 16, 20171Spider Man:Homecoming
I watched the movie Spider-Man:Homecoming again today.I didn't go to the toilet today this time. (I didn't watch the movie's climax because I went to the toilet the previous last time)
OR The last time I saw it I i didn't see the movie's climax because I went to the toilet.
It was is a very, very good movie. OR It is an amazing movie
Peter has a spar super powers but he is a normal high school student. It's good interesting.
And there are good adults in this movie. They have watched Peter. OR They look after Peter
There are good relations between adults and a child in this movie.
Like a mentor, like a mother, like a father, like a teacher.
By the way, I don't know Homecoming. What party is it?NOTE: 良いレビューです! When we talk about a movie or book in English we use the present tense. It is okay to use past tense...but it is better in present. This is because the movie/book is always "happening".
Also, your grammar is quite good, but you used the verb "watch" three times. So it's a good idea to use different verbs with the same meaning e.g. "see the movie's climax", "they looked after Peter".
0 votedAugust 16, 20171
