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Spider Man:Homecoming I watched the movie Spider-Man:Homecoming again today. I didn't go to the toilet today. (I didn't watch the movie's climax because I went to the toilet the previous time) It was very very good movie. Peter has a spar power but he is a normal high school student. It's good. And there are good adults in this movie. They have watched Peter. There are good relations between adults and a child in this movie. Like a mentor, like a mother, like a father, like a teacher. By the way, I don't know Homecoming. What party is it?

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Spider Man:Homecoming

I watched the movie Spider-Man:Homecoming again today.

I didn't go to the toilet today this time. (I didn't watch the movie's climax because I went to the toilet the previous last time)

OR The last time I saw it I i didn't see the movie's climax because I went to the toilet.

It was is a very, very good movie. OR It is an amazing movie
Peter has a spar super powers but he is a normal high school student. It's good interesting.
And there are good adults in this movie. They have watched Peter. OR They look after Peter
There are good relations between adults and a child in this movie.
Like a mentor, like a mother, like a father, like a teacher.
By the way, I don't know Homecoming. What party is it?

NOTE:  良いレビューです! When we talk about a movie or book in English we use the present tense. It is okay to use past tense...but it is better in present. This is because the movie/book is always "happening". 

Also, your grammar is quite good, but you used the verb "watch" three times. So it's a good idea to use different verbs with the same meaning e.g. "see the movie's climax", "they looked after Peter".


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Spider Man:Homecoming

I watched the movie 'Spider-Man:Homecoming' again today.
But today, I didn't go to the toilet today whilst watching because I didn't watch the movie's climax last time because I went to the toilet the previous 
It was very very good movie.
Peter has a had spar powers but he is was just a normal high school student. It's was good.
And there are were good adults in this movie. They have watched Peter.
There are were good relations between adults and a child in this movie.
Like a mentor, like a mother, like a father, like a teacher.
By the way, I don't know Homecoming*. What party is it?

*Homecoming: is a tradition where former students (or known as alumni) are welcomed back to the the school they were previously at, mainly to celebrate the school's existence. [I'm not entirely sure about this, this is what I read online so if anyone could correct me, please do, thank you].

*Notes: The movie sounds really interesting, I ike how you described it. I hope my corrections helped, if you don't understand anything, please do leave a comment :)

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