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This part doesnt make sense! Try it again: That's why, even though my mother gave me money as pocket money, I had spent out just small money then. Sometimes I had the time when I was broken.
Maybe: Even though my mother only gave me alittle bit of pocket money, sometime I had enough, even though I was broke. "Broke" means you have no money - it is only used like this! I was broke, she's broke, etc. "Broken" is like - my leg is broken, she broke the cup, the door is broken!
0 votedJuly 23, 20171JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.23th(writing about comic books)
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?
I'm mostly correcting to make things sound more natural!
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.23th
I have a bunch of comic books, that I have been collecting having been correcing sicne my junior high school days.I have a bunch of comic books that I have been collecting since junior high school.
When I was a junior high school (we usually say middle school - at least in the US) student, honestly I was more really into doing that than I am now, even though I was having only a little money.
When I was in middle school, even though I only had a little bit of money, I loved collecting comics, even more than I do now.
Doing that was like a habit for me for 8of 8 years ago, I mean I had I bought some comic books every week.
Collecting comic book was my hobby for 8 years, I bought some every week. (something you do for fun is a hobby - something you do everyday / can't help doing is a habit! like biting your nails (a bad habit))
As like this, I was into corrction comic books.
As you can see, I was into collecting comic books.
Of course, I am a big fun of reading them, something like, Naruto, One piece, Slamdank, Jojo's bizare adventure or whatever.
Obviously I was a big fan of reading them too. I loved Naruto.... etc.
But, lately I have rarely correcting them, I have read them though,
Lately I rarely collect them, but I do read them though!
the reason why I have never doing that was, first of all, beucause of I was at in the age when I do anything on the internet. (either: I'm at the age where I do everything on the internet, OR I was at the age where I didn't do anyting on the internet.) You can read whenever on the internet if you pay some money, you know? Which is why, I think I dont I am thinking it doesn't need to have a bunch boung of comic books. Maybe beause of this, I rarely buy have rarely bought comic books anymore.
One of the reasons why is because when I was younger I rarely did anythign on the internet. Now you can read whatever on the internet if you pay a little bit. I thought I didn't need to have a bunch of comic books, so I rarely buy them anymore.
Great job!
0 votedJuly 23, 20170My diary - 20
Cool, my aniversary 20th entry here.(Cool, my 20th entry is here! Anniversary is used for the repetition of a date.... So, if it was one year from your first entry, you could say "It's the one year anniversary of my first entry!")
So, this weekend going very nice. This weekend is going very nicely (the weekend is happening now) OR / This weekend is going to be very nice (weekend is in the future)A couple of hours ago I returned from Vitebsk. This is a medium-large city in the north of Belarus.
There we played futsal (not an English word?) It was a friendly competition between organizations of (in) our industry.
We didn't have any training, so we lost all of the games. But anyway I saved only good memories about tournament. But I have only good memories of the tournament.Good job!
0 votedJuly 22, 20170I have deviced here. I have begun to translate from russian somethink( but without translater)
I have a device here. I have begun to translate from the Russian I think.
I want to find friends for learn english.I want to find friends to learn English.
high 173, weigh 62 kg, eyesight 1.1, phisics and psiholog ache i dont have.Height 173, weight, physics and psychology
i live in Russia, futhermore in in Volgograd.I live in Russia in Volgograd. I study 11 subjects.
I study in 11 class: english -5, russian - climp. I like to play computer games, best kind - strategy.
I like to play computer games. I think the best kind are strategy games, like chess, which I can play.
Like chess, in (нарды?) i too can play. With humor all ok, with black humor not so well. Sometime I learn france(by heart an hryme, song, phrases and so on)... Sometimes I study French.
next i cannot translate without translater - so hard:)0 votedJuly 22, 20170Note1
Which place on the Earth do you visit ? Which places on Earth have you visited?
I have a legal education. But it is very difficult to find any work here.
What do you teach (at school) ?
I also like work in agriculture, forestry, reserves (outdoor activities). I love nature. I like to take photos.
I think that the main reason is problems in the family.
I like the starry skies. Amateur astronomy is one of my hobbies.
How often do you observe the dark starry night skies at your places place ?0 votedJuly 22, 20170Good job!! I mostly corrected to make things sound more natural, but most of it is technically correct!
It’s my It was my birthday earlier this week. That’s why I thought about this topic to discuss with you.
I was born in July, it’s summer and the hottest time of the year in China. It’s really hot in Beijing these days, I have to turn on the air conditioning all the time when I am at home. Although many people don’t like summer because of the hot weather, I do. Maybe the reason is because my birthday is in summer. (Maybe because my birthday's in the summer.)
("I can still remember" sounds better!) I still can remember very clearly how much I love loved to celebrate my birthday when I was a child. It was always rainy on that day in my memory. My mom always took me out, we went to some specific places to celebrate that day. The first place we went was always the photo studio. I would took take a picture of me for that day, it’s which was kind of a fashion in that time of in China. I believe most Chinese young people of my age have the similar photos. After that, we would have a meal at KFC. Eating fired fried chicken is not a big deal now, but it was very a big luxury for us in the 1990s. The first KFC restaurant to enter into Shenyang was in 1994, and it was not cheap. Before then I even didn’t even know what hamburger iswas. So I could ate up all foods up, even the mayonnaise of on the hamburger. At the end of the day, my mom would buy a birthday cake for me. I remembered once I wanted to eat cakes, but my mom didn’t allow me ("let me" is more informal) because she said it wasn’t the day of my birthday. So from then on, I only eat cakes on ate cake on the day of my birthday.
(Normally you say "speaking of" when you were actually speaking of the topic before. Ex. "Then my dad said goodbye. Speaking of my dad... If it's a new topic you could say; "As for my dad..." or just "My dad would buy me a gift.")
And speak Speaking of my dad, he would buy a gift for me for that day. I can remember he had bought ("had bought" is ok, but just bought is correct!) me a football, a remote-control racing car and a handheld electronic dictionary. I loved those gifts so much.
As the time goes by, I don’t expect to celebrate my birthday as like the old times and I don’t know why. I can take photos or eat KFC on any day now, but it doesn’t make me feel as happy as in the past. Maybe it’s just because I’m not a child anymore.0 votedJuly 22, 20170This is pretty perfect... just a few things!
One critical environmental issue worthing bearing in mind is the depletion of the ozone layer, which is simultaneously the cause and the consequence of other major environmental problems, such the rise in average global temperature and sea level. Another direct effect of it is the huge amount of solar radiation we are receiving daily, which can lead to cancer among other illnesses.
Another environmental problem to consider is the pollution of the rivers which is mainly caused by the industrial sector which produces an enormous amount of toxic waste, which is dumped into the rivers. Not only that but also exhaust fumes emitted into the atmosphere by factories, chimneys, and cars contain an immense amount of hazardous substances that go directly to our lungs and eventually to our bodies.
We should not underestimate our own responsibility in this issue either. For example, most of the houses use fireplaces as heating systems. Fueling them with wet firewood instead of seasoned (what does that mean) firewood, which produces more foul air that heat, engulfing cities in a thick cloud of smog. instead of seasoned firewood, even though the thick cloud of smog engulfing the cities.0 votedJuly 22, 20171Many things to do.
This is good!I'm going to write suggestions for more fluent English!
Today, I need to have my hair cut. Since tomorrow we are going to have a lot of guests, and we are going to do many things. I like showing my island when someone visits me.I like showing people around the Island when they visit me. ( "show you(him/them) around" is a common phrase)
I hope they to be fine.I hope they will be fine.
("I hope they will be fine" is not what you want. Try:I hope they enjoy themselves, or I hope they will have a good time)
Anyway, today I must to do many things, like cleaning my house, for example.
"Need to" or "have to" is more common. We usually don't say "must"
I am writing this before I will go to my english class. Yesterday, I wrote a notebook and sent it to my teacher's email.
"notebook" is the name of the italki section, but is not used like this. I have a notebook, or I wrote in my notebook are correct!
Try: Yesterday I wrote a: paragraph / journal entry / entry in my notebook
I am learning to improve my vocabulary about looking after yourself, like keeping fit and beauty treatments, for example.
"Keeping fit" and "beauty treatments" are not commonly used words. Try: fitness, working out, hygiene, self-care, hair and makeup
It is my last week of the course.
I hope to pass the final exam, because I would like to do next English level.I would like to move on to the next English level. I would live to advance to the next English level.
Good job!!
0 votedJuly 22, 20171Writing in a train is good!
●Detectives have got to go undercover when they follow criminals.
●My running socks got worn out. I want to buy new pairs.I want to buy a new pair.
●They looked really worn out after this long meeting.
●Wow! You are multi-languages learner! multi-language
Chiba, where I lived before, is kind of the suburban of Tokyo. Not sure what you are trying to say...is kind of like suburban Tokyo?
●Some athletes want to end their careers on a high note, others don't.
●A little bird told me that you cheated on me.Good job!
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