This part doesnt make sense! Try it again: That's why, even though my mother gave me money as pocket money, I had spent out just small money then. Sometimes I had the time when I was broken. 

    Maybe: Even though my mother only gave me alittle bit of pocket money, sometime I had enough, even though I was broke. "Broke" means you have no money - it is only used like this! I was broke, she's broke, etc. "Broken" is like - my leg is broken, she broke the cup, the door is broken! 

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.23th(writing about comic books)

I have a bunch of comic books that I have been collecting since junior high school. 

When I was a junior high school (we usually say middle school - at least in the US) student, honestly I was more really into doing that than I am now, even though I was having only a little money.

When I was in middle school, even though I only had a little bit of money, I loved collecting comics, even more than I do now.

Doing that was like a habit for me for 8of 8 years ago, I mean I had  I bought some comic books every week.

Collecting comic book was my hobby for 8 years, I bought some every week. (something you do for fun is a hobby - something you do everyday / can't help doing is a habit! like biting your nails (a bad habit))

As like this, I was into corrction comic books.

As you can see, I was into collecting comic books. 

Of course, I am a big fun of reading them, something like, Naruto, One piece, Slamdank, Jojo's bizare adventure or whatever. 

Obviously I was a big fan of reading them too. I loved Naruto.... etc.

But, lately I have rarely correcting them, I have read them though,

Lately I rarely collect them, but I do read them though!  

the reason why I have never doing that was, first of all, beucause of I was at in the age when I do anything on the internet. (either: I'm at the age where I do everything on the internet, OR I was at the age where I didn't do anyting on the internet.) You can read whenever on the internet if you pay some money, you know? Which is why, I think I dont I am thinking it doesn't need to have a bunch  boung of comic books. Maybe beause of this, I rarely buy have rarely bought comic books anymore.

One of the reasons why is because when I was younger I rarely did anythign on the internet. Now you can read whatever on the internet if you pay a little bit. I thought I didn't need to have a bunch of comic books, so I rarely buy them anymore. 

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