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- book review of Wuthering Heights (This is the first chapter of my book review of Wuthering Heights. It's a great book and I tried to make my words beautiful but I don't know whether it looks strange and weird for native speakers.Hopefully you can modify it for me. Thanks!) It’s a strange novel, consisting of wicked, paranoid, or revengeful characters; it’s a romantic novel, portraying how two desperate lovers draw each other to both heaven and hell. In this novel there is no vague feelings left but fierce passion and hate. The emotions it contains are polarized, so does all the criticism it has received – someone loves the intensive conflicts in it while someone is scared by this weird gothic story. I am the former. I was impressed and inspired by all of these – the characters, the fanatic love and the special Victorian era social environment.November 8, 201730
- Today I took the IELTS speaking test Today I took the IELTS speaking test, which I had been practicing for about a month. The IELTS test I took is located in the testing centre in Beijing Language and Culture University. The scenary inside campus was really enjoyable, yet the weather was not that pleasing because of today's air pollution. After taking identification photo, me and other candidates walked along the hall way to find our testing rooms, which was the most scary time. However, once I actually found my room and met the examiner, I didn't nervous anymore. Maybe because my mind just went blank totally. All I could remember was smiling...When the examiner asked me if I brought electronic equipment with me, I was like: "Yes...what? Oh no no no... "What was I thinking? But thank god I finally became calm and was able to think and speak clearly. The examnier was really nice, but he had a special way to make notes. When I was speaking, he sometimes dot on paper without writing down anything (which I'm not very sure). He put dots on four directions, which I think refers to the four standards in IELTS speaking test: coherence, grammer, vocabulary and pronunciation. I don't know what all of the dots mean. I don't know if more dots means more score or less. Well anyway, it's something in the past. It's time to practice for my writing, listening and reading test. Hopefully I could get a satisfying grade eventually.August 21, 201701
- IELTS writing practicing: Should government spend more money on arts? As modern life has undergone great changes, people’s ideas about how government should distribute revenue are also greatly divided. While somebody believes that government should spare more expense on arts, it is also argued that there are more valuable things for government to care about. The following essay will debate the two statements in further detail. Admittedly, appreciating fine arts is an effective way to develop citizen’s taste, through which people’s spiritual world could be colorful as well. However, the huge effect on people’s spirit would easily fail to work without a solid material foundation. Once government paid more on arts, the expenses on other things like infrastructure or pension would be less, therefore, poor people’s benefits damaged. (This is only the fisrt two paragraghs of my composition because the whole article may be too long to modify. I really hope someone would give me some advice. Thanks!)August 16, 201740
Thank you, Jerry, Bramwell and Phil.
I thought "with the development of XXX" was weird because lately I read an article about the mistakes Chinese candidates make in IELTS speaking test, which was written by an IELTS examiner. He said Chinese candidates (especially students) always use this expression in the test.
Actually we do, both in our writing and speaking test, because it could make the sentense we write (or say) more "complicated".
Since native speakers don't find it strange, could you tell me in what condition should it be used? Thanks!
0 votedAugust 5, 20170- What is the typical "Chinglish" (Chinese English) expression to native speakers?
It really suprised me when I found that native speakers would never or seldom use such expressions like "with the development of XXX".
It's so hard for me to distinguish because I've already got used to some of those mistakes.
August 4, 201782 从七月二十七号到七月二十九号我和老公一起去了岩手县旅行。这是一次三天两夜的旅游。
第一天 我们晚上五点半出门。
我们晚上八点起飞。
老公和旁边座位上的人吵架了。
他们在放胳膊肘的时候发生了矛盾。他们用胳膊肘互相推搡。
我害怕看他们的吵架。
我们晚上九点半到达仙台机场。
我们打算利用机场到租车公司的接送服务。
司机告诉我“你老公去了洗手间。现在他不在的话,我先送别的客人,然后我20分钟后再来。”
老公从洗手间回来后,气炸了肺。“为什么不能等我?”
他乱发脾气了。
我们晚上十点半登记了宾馆。晚上十一点吃了烤牛舌。 辛苦的一天。
第二天
我们先去了岩手野生动物园。
我们坐巴士看了野生的狮子,鸵鸟,虎,千里马,斑马,水牛什么的。
它们很可爱(描述动物的时候用“它们”,如果是一群人的话,用“他们”,这群人都是女性时用“她们”)。
除了狮子和虎以外我们可以给动物喂食。我照了很多的照片。
然后我先去了猊鼻溪谷,那里很漂亮。
我们穿着救生衣坐了小船。这条川的水清澈见底。
我看到了鱼群。
我放松地看好看的景色。
我吃的午饭是好吃的海鲜菜。
握吃的晚饭是意大利面,比萨饼。
我玩儿开心的一天。(不如说“今天我玩得很开心。”)
第三天
我们照了蒸汽火车和向日葵的照片。
向日葵花圃的前面蒸汽火车行驶了(蒸汽火车在向日葵花圃的前面行驶)。很好看。
然后我们看了美丽的稻田画。为发展村子的兴办的活动,农民种了紫色,黄色,绿色的稻子。
我们晚上十点回家了。虽然天气不太好,但这是一次有意思的旅游。0 votedJuly 30, 20171- IELTS writing practice 01: job security or job satisfaction The topic is: Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security, other people think one should find a permanence job.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Here is my essay: Since job is becoming a more and more indispensable part of modern life, people's attitude towards it has undergone great changes as well. Some people believe that doing the favorable job is of vital importance. However, it is also argued that people should put job security first. The following essay will debate the two statements in further detail. There are some convincing arguments supporting that job satisfaction has a great influence on people's career. Firstly, job satisfaction could bring the great sense of achievements or identity. Therefore, people tend to place more energy on their work, which, more importatntly, contributes to the success in career. Secondly, a man who has passion in his job would never fail to gain happiness. For the busy, energy-drained modern people, being in good mood at work will help them get less pressure and more health. Besides, doing the work one prefer means the higher chance to work with the like-minded colleagues, since it is people with the same value or opinion that are likely to prefer the same job. Thus, both work efficiency and satisfying comradeship will be developed. By contrast, job security will also be a sensible choice given the reasons presented below. First, for those who want to make a living, permanent job is a better choice, because it can provide stable income to make sure that they can not only sustain life but also enjoy it. By contrast, doing whatever one wants may make him trapped into unemployment or frequent job-hopping. Besides, the aim of doing a permanent job is not just restricted in simply earning money, but to fight for a rather solid reputation and a stable social network. For example, a civil servant is more likely to be considered as trustworthy compared with a freelance. Personally, I think the two statements are both valid but under respective conditions. In consideration of social class or family background, people in different situations should make different choices. With a relatively good family condition, someone are more suggested to look for an ideal job, thus he may achieve self-value through the process of chasing his dream. However, if someone is in the urgent need to support his family, then job security should be the first thing to ensure.July 28, 201760
