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Some thoughts about internship
It is two and a half months since I began as an intern. I just want to talk about my job. Actually, I am a little disappointed because of the salary. I had thought that I would be squeezed as an intern, but it is difficult to accept when it really happens. There isn't enterprise culture at all. My point is that it‘s very important for the growth of company.
On the other hand, there is also something else wonderful. There are 5 interns in the company ,we have all come from the same school and now we are good friends. I can also now use a photocopier, fax machine and computer. This is progress alright.
In other words, something bad or not, I really learned a lot. At least, I know deeply it's so difficult to make a living.i hope you find this helpful.
0 votedJuly 17, 20170Getting lost
This happened three years ago. It was summer and the weather was too hot, so I and my best friend Alicia decided to do a trip on take a trip to the mountain.
We were looking looked for fresh fun and adventure. We prepared our bag with a basic survival kit: two bottles of water, some sandwiches, fruits, sleeping bag and a map. We decided to leave early in the morning because we wanted to walk while in the day and we wanted arrive at the top of the mountain before night.
The next day we were going to start the trip. All had been made ready! At 4.00 am the alarm clock sounded. We woke up and went to the train station. We took the train from Milan to Bolzano. When we arrived at the Milan Central Station, the train was waiting at platform 21. In a few minutes we left and then arrived at our destination on time.
Finally our adventure was starting! We crossed the centre of the city and arrived to at the base of the mountain. We looked for the pathway indication and so walked in that direction.
After 4 hours we were at the halfway mark of our path journey. We were still full of energy although we were walking for 30 kilometers. We stopped for lunch time and then we continued our walk along the way.
We walked for many other more kilometers when I realized that the map had gone missing. We had got lost and we didn’t know where we were.
We had to turn around and go back in the opposite direction. We walked for 2 hours but the way looked different than before. We were scared and the foot our feet didn’t want move again.
We were waiting for someone or maybe for a miracle! The night was arriving and we didn’t know how to get come back.
It was so dark. Suddenly we looked saw a light. A group of younger guys were walking towards us. They were boy scouts. We were safe. We passed the night with them.
The day after they gave us a new map and finally we were able to find the right way to home.This is well written and wholly understandable. I hope you found the changes useful being mainly grammatical and sentence structure corrections. Some of your sentences are very short which can be useful sometimes for effect. For instance, 'It was so dark. Suddenly we saw a light'. However, in other places it might be more desirable to maintain flow by joining phrases together, for instance; 'We were safe and passed the night with them'.
0 votedJuly 16, 20171What Happened On Earth
What happened on the bus this morning reminded me of the same unpleasant thing which happened to me several years ago when I worked in another city.
It was rush hour in the morning, I took the bus to the office as usual. I prefer this kind of commuting, I can have a nap on the way back and don’t worry about traffic jams. But one day the a bad thing happened when the bus arrived at the station. I was jammed when I only sticked one leg and prepared getting down, As I prepared to get off the bus I became jammed with one leg stuck in the door. I was keeping kept that posture for several seconds till until the bus driver reopened the door. I was really angry and frightened and when I complained this to the bus driver, there was no any apology but blame. In his word's, I am the person who did the wrong thing.
Today, the same thing happened on to a young lady who took had a little girl with her. The little girl first got on the bus first, her mother followed her, only both of them got on at that station. unfortunally Unfortunately, the mother was jamed jammed by the door before she totally got into the bus, she complained too. The same scene again and the poor little girl, open eyes scared, as she opened her scared eyes watched this.
For me and the mother, we didn’t get badly hurt physically, we only need some comforting words when we were scared, but why it is it so hard for them? Anyway, I look down upon such a person.This is a good story which I understood perfectly. I have made some suggested changes to sentence structure. Try making your sentences a little shorter rather than using too many commas.
0 votedJuly 14, 20170
