What Happened On Earth
What happened on bus this morning reminded me the same unpleasant thing which happened to me several years ago when I worked in another city.
It was rush hour in the morning, I took the bus to the office as usual, I prefer this kind of commuting, I can have a nap on the way back and don’t worry about traffic jam. But one day the bad thing happened, when the bus arrived at the station, I was jammed when I only sticked one leg and prepared getting down, I was keeping that posture for several seconds till bus driver reopen the door. I was really angry and frightened, when I complained this to bus driver, there was no any apology but blame, in the word, I am the person did the wrong thing.
Today, the same thing happened on a young lady who took a little girl with her, little girl first got on the bus, her mother followed her, only both of them got on at that station, unfortunally the mother was jamed by door before she totally got into the bus, she complained too, the same scene again, the poor little girl opened her scared eyes watch this.
For me and the mother, we didn’t get bad hurt physically we only need some comforting words when we were scared, but why it is so hard for them? Anyway, I look down upon such person.
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What Happened On Earth
What happened on the bus this morning reminded me of the same unpleasant thing which happened to me several years ago when I worked in another city.It was rush hour in the morning, I took the bus to the office as usual. I prefer this kind of commuting, I can have a nap on the way back and don’t worry about traffic jams. But one day the a bad thing happened when the bus arrived at the station. I was jammed when I only sticked one leg and prepared getting down, As I prepared to get off the bus I became jammed with one leg stuck in the door. I was keeping kept that posture for several seconds till until the bus driver reopened the door. I was really angry and frightened and when I complained this to the bus driver, there was no any apology but blame. In his word's, I am the person who did the wrong thing.
Today, the same thing happened on to a young lady who took had a little girl with her. The little girl first got on the bus first, her mother followed her, only both of them got on at that station. unfortunally Unfortunately, the mother was jamed jammed by the door before she totally got into the bus, she complained too. The same scene again and the poor little girl, open eyes scared, as she opened her scared eyes watched this.
For me and the mother, we didn’t get badly hurt physically, we only need some comforting words when we were scared, but why it is it so hard for them? Anyway, I look down upon such a person.
This is a good story which I understood perfectly. I have made some suggested changes to sentence structure. Try making your sentences a little shorter rather than using too many commas.
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