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Hello friends, this Article is for my training, is the first i I write totally in english, I don´t speak very well because start learn have two weekends. Please, help me with my train. Thanks all.
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Hello friends, this article is for my training. It is the first time I am writing in English as I am not well versed with it. I just started learning it a couple of weeks ago. Please help me in my learning.
0 votedJanuary 22, 20181- Writing about my job.. Hi there, Today I would like to write about my job. I am working as a professional Financial Accountant in a construction company far away from my home country in the middle east. I have a desk job, so I don't have to travel much and quite busy around doing daily routines. I like my job very much because it's related to my study background and right path to more success in life. Today's jobs are not easily done without the involvement of technology and smart work. I always try to out-stand among other peers by using much of the technology in the work. In my work, there is a lot of focus required because there is always numbers involves and need more concentration which brings best out of me. I always learn that if you want more success in life you need to love your job. Additionally, there is no "I" in the team, so as line's said I love to work in a team and support others too. Thank for hearing me today.July 10, 201720
- Writing about my home town Today I would like to address about my Home Town which is Hyderabad. Hyderabad is one of the modern city in India which situated in southern part of the country and also the capital city of Telangana state. Hyderabad is also known as Second Silicon Valley city in India because of its achievement in IT sector. The city has mixed culture and traditions from the various background of people. It has many cultures and festivals from various religions and people love to participate in each other celebration for joy. It also has good taste in food which is famous all around the world. For instance, "Biriyani" which is famous for its spicy and good taste. Whenever tourist come to India especially this part of the country they never leave the city before tasting Biriyani. Apart from technology, culture, traditions, and food it also rated one of the greens and clean city in India. Recently, Hyderabad Airport won the Best Airport Award in Asia for its clean & green, recycling system and eco-friendly airport. Last but not least, Hyderabad city has many historical places like Golgonda Ford, Charminar and Statue of Budda which is in middle of the lake. Hope I try to well display my city image more or less and also hope one day you also interest to visit my Home Town. Thank youJuly 9, 201720
- Write about a travel experience I am writing about my first travelling experience by aeroplane to Dubai. It was a very good experience and delighted to see how comfort and fast a person can travel. It was wonderful to see myself a couple of thousand feet above the ground and touching the clouds. It was a feeling like I got my own wings. I was supposed to feel bad about leaving my family back but feeling excited to be travelling by aeroplane. The technology has reached so heights that I was a changed man after my first travel. Thank YouJuly 7, 201721
Nice letter with minor errors...keep it up
Application letter
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing in reference to your job offer as a music festival assistant, which I saw advertised in the local newspaper "The Valley" on 28th of May. I am looking for a summer job in order to improve my social skills and also to earn some income which could help me to pay for my studies, so I would be very grateful if you could consider my application.
I am 26 years old and I have recently finished my degree in music education. At present, I am doing an internship as a music teacher in a secondary school, and along with that, I am learning to play the piano and the guitar. In addition, I have basic notions in French, German and Japanese, as well as fluency in English. Due to my studies, I have a vast knowledge in music, which in my opinion could be extremely valuable for the job.
As for my character, I consider myself an extroverted, friendly person, who always looks on the positive side of things and get along easily with people. My relatives often say that I am polite, gentle and hard-working as well.
As long as my experience is concerned, I have worked in various school festivals and events for kids, where I had to organize a wide range of activities, take care of children and to advise and help them. For all the above mentioned, I believe I would be a suitable candidate for the position.
I am available this whole summer and I would be glad to do an interview at your convenient time. Please let me know if you have any questions. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Your's faithfully,
Laura0 votedJuly 2, 20172First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I`m from Russia, i live in Moscow,
I`m 22 years old,
Now i finishd university and looking for a job/
I wonted work in bank very mushHi there, I am Larisa from Russia, living in capital city Moscow which is located on the western side. I am 22 years old and completed 16 years of education and looking for the work opportunity in the banking sector to apply my specialty in my job.
Thank You
0 votedJuly 2, 20170Rainy Days
There is a big event in the city on this weekend. It is called "Wochenende an der Jade". Many ships from all around the world are in the harbor. All the people can visit the ships. There are lots to see and do. You can see big sailing ships or military ships from Germany, Holland, and Belgium. Around the harbor, there is a big party. You can hear live music on many stages or you can eat delicious food and drink a cold beer. In this year there were horrible weather conditions. On Thursday, the event started but it also started to rain. And it rained for two days. Many people stayed at home because they don't want to drink their beer under an umbrella in hope that rain will stop in the next hours so the party can start.0 votedJuly 1, 20171- IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Please correct and mark bands In today's modern societies, increasing people are developing culture of living alone then it is previously noted. Definitely, its a negative impact on individual personality and as well as on society, I believe individual has a right to stay as they want but making habit is not consider. With regard to the individual personality, if staying along bring them silence, no-distraction, and make goal orientated. Then it also does change in personality, attitude towards others, and feel crowed among few people. This impact will be not good for health and also for future in his/her old ages. Thus, isolating themselves is can be in temporary cause but for long run it will just bring bad health to your and culture for society. On the other hand, individuals has a right to choose to stay along who are goal orientated, achiever, and passionate about some to reach in life. It happen some time few people has to stay alone, so that it for work environment, studying something, and for search or invent which is not bad at all to stay alone, but, however, that has to mean something to family, country, and world. As a result, being along for something larger then family or friends has to be exceptional or else living along chaos in future life. In conclusion, if individual developing habit for cause temporarily will not change personality or bring new culture, but or else it will develop negative effect in their own life and also future generation. Thus, it has been said families develop societies and happy culture among world. (260 Words)July 1, 201700
- IELTS Writing Task 2 (only Introduction) Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Please correct it. In some developing nations rail transport play's vital role in the movement of people, so their government should expend more budget on railways compare to other travels. I strongly agree to spend more money in increasing demand of public transport and less other modes to minimize environment affect. (48 words)July 1, 201710
HI there,
I am also a learner and I could only find below mistake.
Please correct my mistakes
It's been a long time since I had started learning English but unfortunately, yet I'm not perfect and I'm feeling little different from the day I was begun. The last six months I dedicated to build building my listening capacity now I can understand english English well when I'm watching TV or English speaking movies. Now my biggest obstacle is speaking. It's difficult for me to build sentences quickly. So(,) what should I do to progress my speaking ability.(?)Thank you
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