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IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Please correct and mark bands In today's modern societies, increasing people are developing culture of living alone then it is previously noted. Definitely, its a negative impact on individual personality and as well as on society, I believe individual has a right to stay as they want but making habit is not consider. With regard to the individual personality, if staying along bring them silence, no-distraction, and make goal orientated. Then it also does change in personality, attitude towards others, and feel crowed among few people. This impact will be not good for health and also for future in his/her old ages. Thus, isolating themselves is can be in temporary cause but for long run it will just bring bad health to your and culture for society. On the other hand, individuals has a right to choose to stay along who are goal orientated, achiever, and passionate about some to reach in life. It happen some time few people has to stay alone, so that it for work environment, studying something, and for search or invent which is not bad at all to stay alone, but, however, that has to mean something to family, country, and world. As a result, being along for something larger then family or friends has to be exceptional or else living along chaos in future life. In conclusion, if individual developing habit for cause temporarily will not change personality or bring new culture, but or else it will develop negative effect in their own life and also future generation. Thus, it has been said families develop societies and happy culture among world. (260 Words)

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