Application letter
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am witing in reference to your job offer as a music festival helper, which I saw advertised in the local newspaper "The Valley ", the last 28th of May. I am looking for a summer job in order to improve my social skills and to gain some income which could help me to pay my studies, so I would be very grateful if you could appreciate my application.
I am 26 years old and I have recently finished my degree in Music Education. At present, I am doing an internship as a music teacher in a Secondary School, and along with that I am learning to play the piano and the guitar. In addition, I have basic notions in French, German and Japanese, as well as fluency in English. Due to my studies, I have a vast knowledge in music, which in my opinion could be extremely valuable for the job.
As for my character, I consider myself an extroverted, positive friendly person, who always looks on the bright side of things and gets along easy with people. My relatives often say that I am polite, gentle and hard-working as well.
As long as my experience is concerned, I have worked in various school festivals and events for kids, where I had to organize a wide range of activities, take care of children and to advise and help them. For all the above mentioned, I believe I would be a suitable candidate for the position.
I am available the whole summer and I would be glad to do an interview at any time. Please let me know if you have any question. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
Laura
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Application letter
Dear Sir / Madam,I am writing in reference to your job offer as a music festival assistant, which I saw advertised in the local newspaper "The Valley" on 28th of May. I am looking for a summer job in order to improve my social skills and also to earn some income which could help me to pay for my studies, so I would be very grateful if you could consider my application.
I am 26 years old and I have recently finished my degree in music education. At present, I am doing an internship as a music teacher in a secondary school, and along with that, I am learning to play the piano and the guitar. In addition, I have basic notions in French, German and Japanese, as well as fluency in English. Due to my studies, I have a vast knowledge in music, which in my opinion could be extremely valuable for the job.
As for my character, I consider myself an extroverted, friendly person, who always looks on the positive side of things and get along easily with people. My relatives often say that I am polite, gentle and hard-working as well.
As long as my experience is concerned, I have worked in various school festivals and events for kids, where I had to organize a wide range of activities, take care of children and to advise and help them. For all the above mentioned, I believe I would be a suitable candidate for the position.
I am available this whole summer and I would be glad to do an interview at your convenient time. Please let me know if you have any questions. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Your's faithfully,
Laura
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Application letter
Dear Sir / Madam,I am writing in reference to your job offer as a for the position of music festival helper, which I saw advertised in the local newspaper "The Valley" the last on the 28th of May 2017.
I am looking for a summer job in order to improve my social skills and to gain some income which could help me to pay my studies, so I would be very grateful if you could appreciate my application. I think you should delete that part because it makes you sound too desperate.
I am 26 years old and I have recently finished my degree in Music Education. At present, I am doing an internship as a music teacher in a Secondary School, and along with that I am learning to play the piano and the guitar. In addition to being a native speaker of Spanish, I have basic notions in of French, German and Japanese, as well as fluency in English. Due to my studies, I have a vast knowledge in of music, [What types of music? Be more specific. Classical music? Jazz? Rock? ] which in my opinion could would be extremely valuable for the job.
As for With regards to my character, I consider myself to be an extroverted, positive, friendly person, who always looks on the bright side of things and gets along easy easily with people. My relatives often say that I am polite, gentle and hard-working as well. [That won't do you much good, because character references must be supplied by somebody who is not related to you, and somebody who holds a position of prestige or authority in the community. It would be better to say "I enclose a character reference from my local MP / my doctor / my former teacher / the headmaster of my former High School / my former professor at University / the General Manager at the company at which I am currently an intern].
As long far as my experience is concerned, I have worked in various school festivals and events for kids, where I had to organize a wide range of activities, take care of children, and to advise and help them. For all the above mentioned For the aforementioned reasons, I believe I would be a highly suitable candidate for the position.
I am available the whole summer and I would be glad available/willing [don't make yourself sound too desperate] to do attend an interview at any time. Please let me know if you have any questions. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
Ms Laura Surname
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