Ninth entry: Wild Hungry
Where I live
, there's a restaurant
that I really love to visit
is called Buffalo Wild Wings.
It Iis an
American casual dining restaurant and sport
s bar franchise.
tThis is the
kind of place
where you would take someone if you want to
eat have a big bowl of spicy wings and a cold beer. Is located in a commercial area called District One which is
well-known for
gathering multiple
American franchise restaurants
like such as Starbucks and Chilli's.
In addition,
also you can find hotels, offices and apartment buildings nearby. The
specialty of the house
specials are the chicken wings and boneless pieces of chicken served with different
flavor sauces and french fries. They also serve hamburgers, chicken wraps and sandwiches as
the main plate.
but However,
if you just want a quick snack to have with your drink, you can
just order nachos, onion rings or cheese sticks
for a quick snack to have with your drink. I usually go once a month, especially on Fridays after I leave the office and want to enjoy a cold beer accompanied with a bowl of boneless covered in honey barbecue sauce while I`m watching a football game to relax . I usually go there once a month, especially on Fridays after leaving the office. Normally, I would be relaxed, watching a football game and enjoying a cold beer accompanied with a bowl of boneless covered in honey barbecue sauce.
Now I'm hungry! Awesome write up
In general, "such as" is prefered to "like" when giving examples as like is used as comparison, e.g. Like Andy, Alvin is intelligent.
Don't forget relative pronouns such as that,where, who etc
Unlike Spanish, English tends to capitalize the specific nouns such as American etc.
Most of my corrections are with respect to style. Try to be more concise.
Keep it up!