Ninth entry: Wild Hungry

Where I live, there's a restaurant. I really love to visit. It is called Buffalo Wild Wings. It is an american casual dining restaurant and sport bar franchise. This is the kind of place you would take someone if you want to eat a big bowl of spicy wings and a cold beer. It Is located in a commercial area called District One which is well known for gathering multiple american franchise restaurants like Starbucks and Chilli's. Also, you can find hotels, offices and apartament buildings nearby. The house specials are the chicken wings and boneless pieces of chicken served with different flavour sauces and french fries. They also serve hamburguers, chicken wraps and sandwiches as the main course. If you just want a quick snack to have with your drink, you can order nachos, onion rings or cheese sticks. I usually go once a month, especially on Fridays after I leave the office and want to enjoy a cold beer accompanied with a bowl of boneless covered in honey barbecue sauce while I`m watching a football game to relax. (This last sentence is grammatically correct however, it is a lot of information in one sentence.)

Ninth entry: Wild Hungry

Where I live, there's a restaurant that I really love to visit is called Buffalo Wild Wings. It Iis an American casual dining restaurant and sports bar franchise.  tThis is the kind of place where you would take someone if you want to eat  have a big bowl of spicy wings and a cold beer. Is located in a commercial area called District One which is well-known for gathering multiple American franchise restaurants like such as Starbucks and Chilli's. In addition, also you can find hotels, offices and apartment buildings nearby. The specialty of the house specials are the chicken wings and boneless pieces of chicken served with different flavor sauces and french fries. They also serve hamburgers, chicken wraps and sandwiches as the main plate. but  However, if you just want a quick snack to have with your drink, you can just order nachos, onion rings or cheese sticks for a quick snack to have with your drink.

I usually go once a month, especially on Fridays after I leave the office and want to enjoy a cold beer accompanied with a bowl of boneless covered in honey barbecue sauce while I`m watching a football game to relax . I usually go there once a month, especially on Fridays after leaving the office. Normally, I would be relaxed, watching a football game and enjoying a cold beer accompanied with a bowl of boneless covered in honey barbecue sauce. 

Now I'm hungry! Awesome write up

In general, "such as" is prefered to "like" when giving examples as like is used as comparison, e.g. Like Andy, Alvin is intelligent. 

Don't forget relative pronouns such as that,where, who etc

Unlike Spanish, English tends to capitalize the specific nouns such as American etc.

Most of my corrections are with respect to style. Try to be more concise. 

Keep it up!