Hi Eri!

Please see my corrections in bold below:

Dream (thank you for your correction!)

It was a long time ago, but I remember that I dreamt that I met one of friends in my company. I wondered why I dreamt such a thing, because the reality is totally different and she works for a different company (you can also say: "because in real life she works for a different company"). There was no way such a thing happened in <s>my</s> real life. Yet a few days later, she changed her job and joined my company! My dream was a sign of this!

Good job writing this! Please let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.

Thank you!

Savannah

Hi Anya!

Great question. Here in the United States, we don't use that expression currently. Was this movie maybe older, or maybe set in another English speaking country? It might be an old phrase, or another country's phrase (e.g. England). But yes, based on the context you gave, "go back down" in this situation means go back to sleep.

However, in modern American English we do have a similar expression. Sometimes we say something like this: "I am going to put the baby down for a nap." In the case you described, we are much more likely to say "go back to sleep".

Again, fantastic question! Please let me know if you have any questions about what I wrote for you.

Thank you!

Savannah

Hi Taichi,

Please see my corrections in bold below:

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON September 28th

I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECT my entry). Here, I might write in spoken English, possibly, because I want to improve not just my writing skills, but also my spoken English. Could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON September 28th

My head hurts a little bit right now, but I know why. Yes, it may be because<s> is that</s> I was sleeping in until just now. I honestly haven't had a chance to sleep in recently with my busy work schedule. And I struggle to find the time to get enough sleep. Yes, this might cause lower performance on the job on my part, and I of course <s>really</s> know this well. By the way, I can see what will happen to my job in the future. The industry where I work now, is a seemingly dying industry. The reason is quite simple, I guess. It's because we need <s>to</s> way less <s>of</s> man power than you would think. I mean, we have to work without some at least everyday, so<s> then,</s> is it really necessary? It makes sense that those who work there begin to think about quitting, you know? Yes, I am one of them, actually. But I like my job and my job now is just for me, just so you know. But I am thinking the industry where I work now has no future. I am not sure if I could work a job that is more lively than just me. Actually, I want to work in the area of web design. But I don't have much experience in this area, so would I be able to work in this area if I find employment?

Just a note: when writing in English, we cannot start a sentence with the word "and" or the word "but". However, I know you mentioned you were writing spoken English. For this reason, I did not correct these words because we do tend to start a sentence with "and" or "but" when we are speaking.

Great job with this! Please let me know if you have any questions about my corrections. Thank you!

Savannah

Hi Borislav!

Please see my corrections in bold below:

A hotel review

I stayed at the Hotel Rico for 4 days last week. It is a bit old and its rooms have tiled floors. The major advantage of this hotel is its great location near the beach. However, the toilet bowl in the bathroom had an unpleasant rust stain. The grilled meat was horrible at the restaurant. The fan in the bathroom was very noisy. My room wasn't cleaned properly. I would recommend the hotel only to people who have pretty low standards.

This was really good, there were hardly any mistakes to correct! Please let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.

Thank you!

Savannah