A hotel review
I stayed at the Hotel Rico for 4 days last week. The hotel is a bit old and its rooms have tiled floors. The major advantage of the hotel is its great location near the beach. The bathroom toilet bowl had an unpleasant rust stain. Grilled meat was horrible at the restaurant. The bathroom exhaust fan was very noisy. My room wasn't cleaned properly. I would recommend the hotel only to people who have pretty low standards.
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Hi Borislav!
Please see my corrections in bold below:
A hotel review
I stayed at the Hotel Rico for 4 days last week. It is a bit old and its rooms have tiled floors. The major advantage of this hotel is its great location near the beach. However, the toilet bowl in the bathroom had an unpleasant rust stain. The grilled meat was horrible at the restaurant. The fan in the bathroom was very noisy. My room wasn't cleaned properly. I would recommend the hotel only to people who have pretty low standards.
This was really good, there were hardly any mistakes to correct! Please let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.
Thank you!
Savannah
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Technically all correct and proper for a review. Good job.
A stylistic tip you can consider or ignore: - when something is the entire name of the place, I would leave out "the", so I'd say "I stayed at Hotel Rico". What you wrote could be correct, because it can be interpreted as "I stayed at the hotel, (called) Rico, ..."
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