Roma Traditoribus Non Praemiat

The title I has have chosen is a famous Roman historical statement in latin Latin, which means "Rome doesn't pay traitors.". To put it into context, we need move backwards to Roman ocupation occupation of Hispania, currently Spain and Portugal. At that time, there was a lusitanian Lusitanian warlord called Viriato that was not only was resisting to Roman troops, but also beating them strongly badly. Roman leaders were able to win the war with the Viriato warriors, because there they were guerrilleros guerrillas and masters at hidding hiding into in the forest after attacking to Roman soldiers. , so So the only way to solve that a uphill battle was to find someone among Viriato's staff to retrieve him (Did you leave out a sentence before this one? The subject shifts quickly.). And it that was exactly that how it happened. However, when traitors wanted to receive their promised money, the Romans, who actually admired to Viriato by for his courage, refused it, claimed claiming they didn't agree to pay to any kind of traitors, including those that had help them.

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Not at all. Most of the time, I practice Spanish on my pets! I think my dogs are learning Spanish, too. The question ¿Dónde esta la pelota? is probably ground into my memory far better than it should be. :-D

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I arrived to at Malaga from on vacation five days ago. I am staying at NH hotel, in on San Lorenzo Street. This morning at a quarter past nine, when I was walking along Carreteria street just in front of the Pepe’s restaurant, a man and a woman threatened me with a knive knife and they stolen stole my handbag.
He was a young man The man was young, he was about 25, and 175 centimeters tall,. he He was Caucasian, complexion slim, approximately 60 kilos, and he had short brown hair and he was wearing a grey trousers and a red shirt. He didn’t have tattoos. She The woman was young, too,. She was about 23, 165 centimeters tall, Arabic, heavy, - approximately 85 kilos,. she She had long dark hair and she had a piercing on her right eyebrow. and She had one tattoo on her left leg and she was wearing blue jeans and a yellow shirt.

They fled towards the center of the city driving a motorcycle. My handbag is black and contained a blue wallet with 150 euros, one passport but I can`t remember it's number, my identification card and Ddriver’s license, a Eelectronic Visa card Visa, an mobile phone Iphone iPhone 6S - black with IMEI 10000002111453 - and a the keys of to my car. The value of all objects stolen is about 900 euros.

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A complaint letter after a wedding party

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the party that me and my husband my husband and I hired held with the Meliá Hotel located in Valencia and called ‘Queen Mary’ for celebrating our son’s wedding.
I am sorry to say that I was extremely disappointed with the development of this social event, which was quite important for me and my family.

First of all, as your brochure, as and our signed contract, talked about ‘"top quality food"’. When the meals became to arrive to arrived for our guests, we were able to check that that statement assesment was absolutely false.

Given that we We made a test dinner for choosing to choose and select the dishes, but the quantity and quality of food that were leaving of left the kitchen were completely different of we have than what we tasted.
The toasts were was extremely dry, the smoked salmon was quite greasy, the shrimps smelled rotten, the steak was old and fibered tough, the garnish was short lacking, and the wedding cake tasted like a batter with butter as the only unique flavor flavour.
But not only that, the waiters weren’t professional people. They had were rude and had bad manners, bothering which bothered to all of us.
I would like you to investigate this matter and let me know your decision.
We must insist in be being compensated for this maddening situation. I hope that this matter can be resolve resolved.
Yours faithfully,

Anna Green

Great job! I corrected for US English rather than UK. If you are trying to write in UK English, "flavour" would be correct, as would the single quotes around "top quality food." Hope this helps!

What happened today.

Today I spent perhaps one of the most interesting days over the last month. I took a long walk across Kiev - through Hydropark, Rusanivka all the way to my home. Now I'll tell everything in order.

The other day my brother and his wife came to us from Lviv. They are going to stay with us for around a week. Today's This morning we decided to go for a walk. So first thing in the morning we got up and had slight small breakfast while thinking about where to go, - Kiev is a very large city. At first, we considered going to The Holosiivskyi Park and visiting a museum located nearby. But then we change our minds and decided to visit Hydropark, it's an amazing island on the Dniepr. You might know that Kiev is located on the biggest river of in the Ukraine, the Dniepr. The island contains many beautiful sights to see and a subway track goes through it. We came there at first by bus, then by subway.
We visited the museum "Kyiv in mMiniature" there. There are a lot of small reproductions of famous buildings and places located in Kiev and Ukraine. After strolling around Hydropark we headed out to the left bank of Kyiv - to Livoberegna station by subway. By the way, there will take place the Eurovision contest next month exactly will take place near Livoberegna station. From this place, we went to Rusanivka. Today a lot of people have enjoyed being in nature around this place and roasting shishkabobs. We passed Rusanivka and headed home. We passes passed by 2 two huge bridges, stopped by a big shopping mall to buy some groceries, and finally got home.

(Wonderfully written - great job!)

Read, Rread.

Person People with short attention spans, like me, has have an awfully difficult time reading one complete book even in my own language. They say, “Find a book with the topic you like.” “Remember it would help your English grammar.” It is like perfecting one of the a complete tune in on the piano. Too many sharps and too many flats. I would not be able to play one tune with on the piano.

One day, I was ready to tackle this challenge again after my hundred failed attempts. This The book is the a travel book written by a young, popular writer on Ttelevision. His He has traveled is from Los Angeles to the end of the world. It is exactly the topic I love the most as the a person who had traveled in a same part of the continent by luck and too much adventurousness a long, and long time ago. And I fallen fell in love with all the countries. I checked the criteria one on, “Find a book with the topic you like.”

Despite his age, I can tell he is the very humble young man who doesn’t brag about being successful amongst so many writers who have had no money in his introduction when he started. Him using Because he used familiar words for to me, I already found this book enjoyable in first five pages.

However, because of too many much use of commas in almost all of his sentences, I got extremely confused with the flow of the story. I suppose his intent was to be friendly to the readers, but his friendly sentences come came with too many uses of the word "which" and too many commas. I didn’t check the criteria, too two.

My endeavor, which is extremely difficult, continues.

(Nice job overall! Don't lose heart. You are doing quite well.)