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A complaint letter after a wedding party Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the party that me and my husband hired with the Meliá Hotel located in Valencia and called ‘Queen Mary’ for celebrating our son’s wedding . I am sorry to say that I was extremely disappointed with the development of this social event, quite important for me and my family. First of all, as your brochure, as our signed contract, talked about ‘ top quality food’. When the meals became to arrive to guests, we were able to check that that assesment was absolutely false. Given that we made a test dinner for choosing and select the dishes, the quantity and quality of food that were leaving of the kitchen were completely different of we have tasted. The toasts were extremely dry, the smoked salmon was quite greasy, the shrimps smelled rotten, the steak was old and fibered, the garnish was short and the wedding cake tasted like a batter with butter as unique flavour. But not only that, the waiters weren’t professional people. They had rude and bad manners, bothering to all of us. I would like to investigate this matter and let me know your decision. We must insist in be compensated for this maddening situation. I hope that this matter can be resolve Yours faithfully, Anna Green

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A complaint letter after a wedding party

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the party that me and my husband my husband and I hired held with the Meliá Hotel located in Valencia and called ‘Queen Mary’ for celebrating our son’s wedding.
I am sorry to say that I was extremely disappointed with the development of this social event, which was quite important for me and my family.

First of all, as your brochure, as and our signed contract, talked about ‘"top quality food"’. When the meals became to arrive to arrived for our guests, we were able to check that that statement assesment was absolutely false.

Given that we We made a test dinner for choosing to choose and select the dishes, but the quantity and quality of food that were leaving of left the kitchen were completely different of we have than what we tasted.
The toasts were was extremely dry, the smoked salmon was quite greasy, the shrimps smelled rotten, the steak was old and fibered tough, the garnish was short lacking, and the wedding cake tasted like a batter with butter as the only unique flavor flavour.
But not only that, the waiters weren’t professional people. They had were rude and had bad manners, bothering which bothered to all of us.
I would like you to investigate this matter and let me know your decision.
We must insist in be being compensated for this maddening situation. I hope that this matter can be resolve resolved.
Yours faithfully,

Anna Green


Great job! I corrected for US English rather than UK. If you are trying to write in UK English, "flavour" would be correct, as would the single quotes around "top quality food." Hope this helps!

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