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Read, Read Person with short attention spans like me has awfully difficult time reading one complete book even in my own language. They say “Find a book with the topic you like.” “Remember it would help your English grammar.” It is like perfecting one of the complete tune in piano. Too many sharps and too many flats I would not be able to play one tune with the piano. One day I was ready to tackle this challenge again after my hundred failed attempts. This book is the travel book written by a young popular writer on Television. His travel is from Los Angeles to the end of the world. It is exactly the topic I love the most as the person who had traveled in a same part of continent by luck and too much adventurousness a long and long time ago. And I fallen in love with all the countries. I check the criteria one “Find a book with the topic you like.” Despite his age, I can tell he is the very humble young man who doesn’t brag about being successful amongst so many writers who have no money in his introduction. Him using familiar words for me I already found this book enjoyable in first five pages. However too many use of commas in almost all of his sentences, I got extremely confused with the flow of the story. I suppose his intent was to be friendly to the readers but his friendly sentences come with too many which and too many commas. I didn’t check the criteria two. My endeavor, which is extremely difficult, continues.

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Read, Read

Person Someone with a short attention spans like me has an awfully difficult time reading one complete book even in my own language. They say “Find a book with the topic you like.” “Remember it would help your English grammar.” It is like perfecting one of the a complete tune ("piece" is a better word for music in English, Tune can sound a little childish) in on piano. Too many sharps and too many flats I would not be able to play one tune with the piano.

One day I was ready to tackle this challenge again after my hundredth failed attempts. This book is the There is a travel book written by a young popular writer on Television. His travel is from Los Angeles to the end of the world. It is exactly the topic I love the most as the person who had traveled in a same part of continent by luck and too much adventurousness a long and long time ago. And I fallen in love with all the countries. I check the criteria one “Find a book with the topic you like.”

Despite his age, I can tell he is the a very humble young man who doesn’t brag about being successful amongst so many writers who have no money in his introduction. Him using familiar words for me I already found this book enjoyable in first five pages.

However he used too many use of commas in almost all of his sentences, I got extremely confused with the flow of the story. I suppose his intent was to be friendly to the readers but his friendly sentences come with too many which and too many commas. I didn’t check the criteria two.

My endeavor, which is extremely difficult, continues.


Very good job. Your English is way better than my Chinese. If you have any english questions you can ask me! : )

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Person People with short attention spans, like me, has have an awfully difficult time reading one complete book even in my own language. They say, “Find a book with the topic you like.” “Remember it would help your English grammar.” It is like perfecting one of the a complete tune in on the piano. Too many sharps and too many flats. I would not be able to play one tune with on the piano.

One day, I was ready to tackle this challenge again after my hundred failed attempts. This The book is the a travel book written by a young, popular writer on Ttelevision. His He has traveled is from Los Angeles to the end of the world. It is exactly the topic I love the most as the a person who had traveled in a same part of the continent by luck and too much adventurousness a long, and long time ago. And I fallen fell in love with all the countries. I checked the criteria one on, “Find a book with the topic you like.”

Despite his age, I can tell he is the very humble young man who doesn’t brag about being successful amongst so many writers who have had no money in his introduction when he started. Him using Because he used familiar words for to me, I already found this book enjoyable in first five pages.

However, because of too many much use of commas in almost all of his sentences, I got extremely confused with the flow of the story. I suppose his intent was to be friendly to the readers, but his friendly sentences come came with too many uses of the word "which" and too many commas. I didn’t check the criteria, too two.

My endeavor, which is extremely difficult, continues.


(Nice job overall! Don't lose heart. You are doing quite well.)

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