请你修改我的句子： 四月十七号

这边好像有错误

Are these sentence correct grammatically?

我就过去路上我就出门or我就上路了（过去means go to but路上is like 'on my way.'  出门means leave the house. 上路means hit the road），我们的住处附近有很多市场，我在去一近(我在一进门, as oon as i enter...）的时候， 看看（看到means saw,while 看看 is more like look around）路边在一家小的店在（在does not indicate location here. it's like 'be doing something' to describe the situation）卖鱼。我看一看以后就发现多（很多 is better）的鱼是红色的！就去临请售货员给我两条白色的鱼。

他看一看说：鱼没有白色的！我觉得很奇怪，说: 我应该（我要白色的鱼 is more proper. it's like you tell the salesman, ' i need to buy white ones.' 应该feels like you telling him 'i am obliged to buy'）买白色的鱼， 你怎么没有它？售货员说：不只我们没有白色的于(typo i think)，别的店也没有他，多数有红色的。

我每（没，typo）接受（我没听他的话 sounds more native. you can say 接受意见, as in accept your comment or recommendation）他的话去市场那儿（orally correct and we do often use that a lot in daily life, but in written essay, it's better to avoid it）。在那儿(or at least, leave out the 儿 sound) 找一天半（半天）还没有杂找到白色的鱼，觉得很生气。

会家的和根（回家跟）妈妈说：他们没有白色的鱼。

她说，我第一次听说这样的事。我说：他们只有小红色的。妈妈就笑说：我想两条大白色的鱼（大白鱼）为了做新年的饭（年夜饭），但是你不明白了我的意思（or 你误会了我的意思， as in you misunderstood me），你去过请售货员给你小白色的鱼(小白鱼）。

It is a well written article and I have no problem understanding most of it. For some small issues, I've marked them out. But I am afraid I fail to understand the ending about the white or red fish. Is it the 年糕 shaped of fish that you are referring to? Let me know if you need further explanation of my corrections:) Good luck!