JUST A DIARY ON Mar.25th (wrote about NARUTO)

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JUST A DIARY ON Mar.25th

I have read through my favorite comic again through today. It's called Naruto. Naruto is really popular, of course, in Japan, not only here in Japan, but also all over the world. What brought made me interested in this comic? Why am I into Naruto? I thought for a second, to try and figure out know the reason. I think it's because I can see the American influence throughout this work. The writer, "Masashi Kishimoto", who draws "NARUTO", has said that he thought that if there was an atmosphere of the United States in a Japanese ninja world, It would be fantastic. I'd like to show you an example here. First, I want you to think about the color of Uzumaki Naruto's hair. ( He is the hero in this manga.) When I heard the word "ninja", I picture someone with black hair. But how about Uzumaki Naruto? He has bright yellow hair, in spite of being ninja. Why? The writer explains, "I wanted to mix American style with the Japanese atmosphere." We all think that there are no Japanese with yellow hair. So, the writer made Naruto have a yellow hair. He expressed the American influence in this way.

なるとってアメリカの影響があるか全然知りませんでした！日本のアニメや漫画といえばなるとですので、ちょっとびっくりしました！

黄色ところにもっと自然の言い方を入れました！英語すごくお上手ですね。がんばって！