JUST A DIARY ON Mar.25th (wrote about NARUTO) I want someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ON Mar.25th I have read my favorite comic again through today. It's N

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JUST A DIARY ON Mar.25th (wrote about NARUTO) I want someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ON Mar.25th I have read my favorite comic again through today. It's Naruto. Naruto is really popular, of course, in Japan, not only here but also all over the world. What brought me into this comic? Why am I into NARUTO. I thought for a second to know the reason. Because I can see the Amereicaness point thorough this work. The writer "Masashi Kishimoto" who draw "NARUTO" also said that he thought that if there was the atmosphere of the United States in the Japanese ninja world, It must be fantastic. I will show you a example here. First, I want you to remember the color of Uzumaki Naruto's hair. ( He is a hero in this manga) When I heard this word "ninja", Japanese would come up with him with black hair first.But how about Uzumaki Naruto? He has a bland yellow hair in spite of being ninja. Why? The writer actually said this. "I wanted to mix Aericaness point with Japanese atmosphere. We will well think that there is no japanese with yellow hair. So the writer made Naruto have a yellow hair. He expressed Americaness by this way.

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JUST A DIARY ON Mar.25th (wrote about NARUTO)

I want someone to correct my diary. Could you do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ON Mar.25th

I have read through my favorite comic again through today. It's called Naruto. Naruto is really popular, of course, in Japan, not only here in Japan, but also all over the world. What brought made me interested in this comic? Why am I into Naruto? I thought for a second, to try and figure out know the reason. I think it's because I can see the American influence throughout this work. The writer, "Masashi Kishimoto", who draws "NARUTO", has said that he thought that if there was an atmosphere of the United States in a Japanese ninja world, It would be fantastic. I'd like to show you an example here. First, I want you to think about the color of Uzumaki Naruto's hair. ( He is the hero in this manga.) When I heard the word "ninja", I picture someone with black hair. But how about Uzumaki Naruto? He has bright yellow hair, in spite of being ninja. Why? The writer explains, "I wanted to mix American style with the Japanese atmosphere." We all think that there are no Japanese with yellow hair. So, the writer made Naruto have a yellow hair. He expressed the American influence in this way.

なるとってアメリカの影響があるか全然知りませんでした！日本のアニメや漫画といえばなるとですので、ちょっとびっくりしました！

黄色ところにもっと自然の言い方を入れました！英語すごくお上手ですね。がんばって！

I read through my favorite comic again through today. It's called Naruto. Naruto is really popular, of course, not only in Japan, but also all over the world. What made me interested in this comic? Why am I into Naruto? I thought for a second, to try and figure out the reason. I think it's because I can see the American influence throughout this work. The writer, "Masashi Kishimoto", who draws "NARUTO", has said that he thought that if there was an atmosphere of the United States in a Japanese ninja world, It would be fantastic. I'd like to show you an example here. First, I want you to think about the color of Uzumaki Naruto's hair. ( He is the hero in this manga.) When I hear the word "ninja", I picture someone with black hair. But how about Uzumaki Naruto? He has bright yellow hair, in spite of being ninja. Why? The writer explains, "I wanted to mix American style with the Japanese atmosphere." We all think that there are no Japanese with yellow hair. So, the writer made Naruto have a yellow hair. He expressed the American influence in this way.

Same here! I'm so excited at Boruto. I can't wait to read it.

Aaaah Naruto !!! I remember all the time spent in front of the book and the anime ! One of the best moments I have spent with an anime in my whole life. It's difficult to realize that it's now finished... I agree with you for the American influence present through the manga and it remains thousands and thousands things to say about Naruto. Don't worry, Boruto is coming soon ;)

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