Could someone correct this short text? Thanks a lot!

A crucial question that arises is what kind of information we might expect from celebrities using social networks? Their answers seems to reflect how their personalities are in the real life. For example Barack Obama shows a formal, yet relaxed style when using Twitter. He can express his concerns regarding official issues, but at the same time, he can also post a photograph of his dog playing with his children. Artists can be more controversial since their fame is usually fed through scandals and not necessarily their talents.

We should not be surprised when we see normal anonymous (Due to the context that you are presenting in your work (i.e Twitter), let's assume that Twitter users cannot be anonymous) people behaving the same way. Television no longer has the ability to condition society, but the role have been passed over to social media. Future generations will grow in this new digital environment, and it will depend on us and on the rules that we establish, with the idea that they will live with their feet on the ground and not indulge in the fantasy world created by social media

Social media = social networking sites, applications and other sites where contents based on the number of users participating and the contents generated by users themselves. I put this down because I thought it would be more convenient and more inclusive. 

And also, your English is really good! Keep it up! :)

study English

I just finished one class with italki teacher. It has been a long time since I have a English Class.
For almost one year, I just remove my mind had to take my mind off studying English. Maybe I was getting lazy to learn a different/new language. (여기서 new하고 different랑 써놨어요. 아마 bobo님이 영어를 오랫동안 배우고 있어서 different가 맞일거에요.)
Or just need to pause then to do relax. After I finish my class, I feel shameful for me. Because of my attitude,
I should keep on practicing English, but I didn't do that. what is The result of my actions is that my level is same as like 3-4 years before. Ah, that make me really sad. but I know I always think it's because of my bad attitude. Nevertheless I wouldn't should try and fix this habit.
So I write down some words on the italki notebook to keep me feel inspired to learn the English language ㅜ

잘하고 있어요. :) 저도 마찬가지도 한국어 공부를 노력해야 할 것 같아요.