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    Terrorist attack in Paquistan

    The Brazilian government condemns the terrorist attack which took place yesterday, February 16, against a Sufi temple in the Sinsh province (Paquistan), which left over than 80 people dead and a hundred injured.
    While showing condolences to the victims' families, vows of a quick recovering to those who were injured and solidarity to the Paquistani people and government, the Brazilian government reiterates its rejection against every terrorist act, whatever its motivation.

    Obs.: That text is the translation of the folowing note
    http://www.itamaraty.gov.br/pt-BR/notas-a-imprensa/15766-atentadopaquistao1702 


    The#1 problem here is run on sentences. That's more or less the only problem.

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    My description - au pair

    In few months I'm going to USA to work as au pair (nanny) and I have to write my descripion to my future host family. Could you help me with this?

    My name is Emilia. I'm 23 years old and I'm from Poland. I live with my parents in a small town close to Wrocław. I graduated with a (degree type) in Spanish philology and I'm very interested in foreign languages. I speak Spanish pretty well, my English isn't perfect but I try to learn everyday.
    The main reason I would like to be an au pair is I love kids. I've been fortunate enough to have had previous opportunities to work with children, and I have lot of experience because of it. I take care of children of almost every age. I have experience with a newborn, babies, a one year old girl, and kids aged 4 and 7. Primarily I looked after my sister who is 11 years old.
    I've had my driving license for 5 years and I drive almost everyday, I am always very careful and responsible. In my free time I like to read books but also I'm an active woman. I like to ride by bike, run, and go to the gym. As I said I love learning languages and know different cultures pretty well.
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    Let's Go!

    Hi. I'm in the beginning stages of learning English. I'm from Rio de Janeiro, Brazil. (city, then country. it's weird I know.)
    Today is very hot. It's summer time here in Brazil. I want to go to the beach, but I'm very tired. Maybe tomorrow I'll go.
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    I'm going to take a shower first.
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    Mostly infowars related things. Interested in inner workings of deep state governments and economic systems; and their ability to be abused. 
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    Remember to try your best to limit your 'run-on sentences'.  

    This is LOVE

    There is nothing called LOVE...love is a combination of trust, sacrifice, understanding, responsibilities, and being with each other in good and bad times. When all of these things come together then it can be love. Marriage is not love's success, marriage is an entirely new journey of love. When you marry someone you get blessed by god, and you get the opportunity to come physically and mentally together. Remember; if you love someone, and you're getting married because god told you to marry,  your life will be full of blessings from god. and we all need that.
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    Seek = to try to find something. Find = Locating something previously missing. Pick up = Taking an item off the ground. Search = same as SEEK. Fetch = To RETRIEVE something, doesnt have to be LOST. You can fetch the TV remote in front of you.
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    Foods

    Talking about food is delicious. My favorite dessert flavor is chocolate. Cake, pastry, ice cream, pie.*** I love all types of candy with chocolate, especially if it's made by my mom. She is a great cook and her hobby is cooking for family for special days and celebrations. On the other hand my wife does not have the same ability (or talent) to cook. She is kind of a lazy woman. She hates it, spends a lot of time cooking and afterwards she thinks about the huge mountain of plates and pans that she has to clean. Doing the dishes is a boring chore to do. Ultimately I help her with these chores because I think it is a responsibility for us. During the day I try to make at least 5 meals. Of course the main meal is lunch and here in Brazil we have the tradition of eating rice, beans and a kind of meal for lunch. I like chicken meat grilled or roasted. Barbecue is another type of very famous food here. When the birthday from someone in my house occurs on the weekend, you can be sure that we will have an awesome party with barbecue and a big chocolate cake. Bye for now ! 


    This isn't a perfect correction it's just the best I could do in a short period of time.

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