Foods
To talk about food is a delicious. For example my favorite dessert is chocolate. Cake, pastry, ice cream, pie. All type of candy with chocolate is the number one for me, especially if cooked by Mom. She is a great cook and her hobby is cook to family in special days and celebrations. On the other hand my wife do not have the same ability (or talent) to cook. She is a kind of lazy woman to cook. She hate it, spend a lot of time cooking and after it she will think about the huge mountain of plates and pan that she have to clean. Really do the dishes is a boring chore to do. Ultimately I help her with theses chores because I think it is a responsibility for us. During the day I try to make at least 5 meals. Of course the main meal is lunch and here in Brazil we have the tradition of eat at lunch rice, bean and a kind of meal. I like more chicken meat grilled or roasted. Barbecue is another type of food very famous here. When the birthday from someone in my house occur on weekend, is sure that we will have an awesome party with barbecue and a big cake with chocolate. Bye for now !
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Talking about food is delicious. My favorite dessert flavor is chocolate. Cake, pastry, ice cream, pie.*** I love all types of candy with chocolate, especially if it's made by my mom. She is a great cook and her hobby is cooking for family for special days and celebrations. On the other hand my wife does not have the same ability (or talent) to cook. She is kind of a lazy woman. She hates it, spends a lot of time cooking and afterwards she thinks about the huge mountain of plates and pans that she has to clean. Doing the dishes is a boring chore to do. Ultimately I help her with these chores because I think it is a responsibility for us. During the day I try to make at least 5 meals. Of course the main meal is lunch and here in Brazil we have the tradition of eating rice, beans and a kind of meal for lunch. I like chicken meat grilled or roasted. Barbecue is another type of very famous food here. When the birthday from someone in my house occurs on the weekend, you can be sure that we will have an awesome party with barbecue and a big chocolate cake. Bye for now !This isn't a perfect correction it's just the best I could do in a short period of time.
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Foods
To talk about food is a delicious. For example my favorite dessert is chocolate. Cake, pastry, ice cream, pie. All type of candy with chocolate is the number one for me, especially if cooked by Mom. She is a great cook and her hobby is cook to family in special days and celebrations. On the other hand my wife do not have the same ability (or talent) to cook. She is a kind of lazy woman to cook. She hate it, spend a lot of time cooking and after it she will think about the huge mountain of plates and pan that she have to clean. Really do the dishes is a boring chore to do. Ultimately I help her with theses chores because I think it is a responsibility for us. During the day I try to make at least 5 meals. Of course the main meal is lunch and here in Brazil we have the tradition of eat at lunch rice, bean and a kind of meal. I like more chicken meat grilled or roasted. Barbecue is another type of food very famous here. When the birthday from someone in my house occur on weekend, is sure that we will have an awesome party with barbecue and a big cake with chocolate. Bye for now !To talk about food is a delicious idea.OR Talking about food is a delicious idea. Chocolate is my favorite dessert, may it be cake, pastry, ice cream, or pie. I love all types of candy with chocolate and it's the best for me especially if it's made by Mom. She is a great cook and her hobby is cooking for the family during special occasions and celebrations. On the other hand my wife do not have the same ability (or talent) to cook. She is kind of lazy to cook. She hates it! When she spends a lot of time cooking, after it she will think about the huge mountain of plates and pan that she has to clean. Doing the dishes is really a boring chore to do. Ultimately I help her with these chores because I think it is a responsibility for us. During the day I try to make at least 5 meals. Of course the main meal is lunch, and here in Brazil we have the tradition of eating rice, bean and a kind of meal for lunch. I like more of chicken meat grilled or roasted. Barbecue is another type of food that is very famous here. When a birthday of someone in my house occurs (or happens) on a weekend, it is sure that we will have an awesome party with barbecue and a big chocolate cake. Bye for now !
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