Terrorist attack in Paquistan
The Brazilian government condemns the terrorist attack which took place yesterday, February 16, against a Sufi temple in the Sinsh province (Paquistan), which left over than 80 people dead and a hundred injured.
While showing condolences to the victims' families, vows of a quick recovering to those who were injured and solidarity to the Paquistani people and government, the Brazilian government reiterates its rejection against every terrorist act, whatever its motivation.
Obs.: That text is the translation of the folowing note
http://www.itamaraty.gov.br/pt-BR/notas-a-imprensa/15766-atentadopaquistao1702
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Terrorist attack in Paquistan
The Brazilian government condemns the terrorist attack which took place yesterday, February 16, against a Sufi temple in the Sinsh province (Paquistan), which left over than 80 people dead and a hundred injured.While showing condolences to the victims' families, vows of a quick recovering to those who were injured and solidarity to the Paquistani people and government, the Brazilian government reiterates its rejection against every terrorist act, whatever its motivation.
Obs.: That text is the translation of the folowing note
http://www.itamaraty.gov.br/pt-BR/notas-a-imprensa/15766-atentadopaquistao1702
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