Day 4 - Starting English

I was given a guitar yesterday. I was so excited because I always hope that I have always wanted one. I really want to learn to play guitar. Although I am bad at music but I will try. That The sound is great!(or: It sounds great!)  I am very happy.

The most romantic moment in my life

My homework today is: Write a paragraph about the most romantic moment in my life, but I want to write a part of my favorite song with my words.

I was in a subway sitting and thinking of my life and then when she walked and sat down in front of me. I saw her face and loved her instantly in this at that moment. She was wearing a beautiful red dress and she was crying with her a black eye (am I assuming this correctly? She has a black eye, like she was beaten or something?). We talked for many hours and then the subway got went into a dark tunnel. I kissed her lips, touched her face and forgot all about everything.  I can’t forget this that moment, but I should forget it, because she was is married.

I would almost prefer the simpler one. For what your student is trying to express, there is really no need to use complicated sentence structures. Personally I think it flows better to just say "I'm 15 years old and I'm currently in middle school" :)

"serve" is weird here. "help" is good enough. Also, don't say "I promise", that also sounds strange in an application. I will work hard and do what I can to help all the runners. I will work hard and do what I can to make sure the participants have a great experience.

Either "I don't get too good" or "I don't do too well" will work in the context.

my hair

Nine months ago that I started letting my hair grow.I wanted to let my hair grow for a year but I m looking like a Super Mario mushroom

haha, I'm sure it's not that bad :P

An unpleasant purchase

You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
- what was the item
- why it was important that you get it immediately
- what you suggest the company should do now

Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is John Lee, and I ordered a book from your site last Sunday(August 1st). The book is called "An Insight into IELTS " by a well-known linguist, and it was just released at the end of last month. It was supposed to arrive at my place on the following(next) day but it still hasn't. However, unfortunately, I have not got it until now.
I will be taking IELTS early next month, but I am still not very confident about it the upcoming test. I think my vocabulary is still not extensive enough to allow for me to get a the score I need. An important part of this book devotes to explaining how to one can improve his or her vocabulary in spoken English. The test is around the corner, so I need the book desperately; otherwise, I might fail the exam once again.
I would like to get this book as soon as possible. I was wondering if you could check the reasons for the delay, and deliver the book to my place arrange a delivery within 24 hours. or If not, I would like to request ask for a full refund. I also want plus an extra $10 in compensation for the delay.

Yours faithfully,
John, Lee

倪浩! 这是 第一课.

你好。
我叫克谢尼亚。
我是俄罗斯人。我之所以学习汉语二月是因为我想工作二月在中国工作。
我上午学习。
更我知道还会说英语。我的家人喜欢外语。他们不可以知道。（what can't they know?)
谢谢。