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The most romantic moment in my life My homework today is: Write a paragraph about the most romantic moment in my life, but I want to write a part of my favorite song with my words. I was in a subway sitting and thinking of my life and then she walked and sat down in front of me. I saw her face and loved her in this moment. She was wearing a beautiful red dress and she was crying with her black eye. We talked many hours and then the subway got in a dark tunnel. I kissed her lips, touched her face and forgot all. I can’t forget this moment, but I should forget it, because she was married.

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The most romantic moment in my life

My homework today is: Write a paragraph about the most romantic moment in my life, but I want to write a part of my favorite song with my words.

I was in a subway sitting and thinking of my life and then she walked and sat down in front of me. I saw her face and loved her in this moment. She was wearing a beautiful red dress and she was crying with her black eye  eyes. We talked many hours and then the subway got  went in a dark tunnel. I kissed her lips, touched her face and forgot all. I can’t forget this moment, but I should forget it, because she was married. 
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The most romantic moment in my life

My homework today is: Write a paragraph about the most romantic moment in my life, but I want to write a part of my favorite song with my words.

I was in a subway sitting and thinking of my life and then when she walked and sat down in front of me. I saw her face and loved her instantly in this at that moment. She was wearing a beautiful red dress and she was crying with her a black eye (am I assuming this correctly? She has a black eye, like she was beaten or something?). We talked for many hours and then the subway got went into a dark tunnel. I kissed her lips, touched her face and forgot all about everything.  I can’t forget this that moment, but I should forget it, because she was is married.

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