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Hello,I am Edith Wang from China and am interested in English. I want to improve my English writing, and if you want to practice Chinese writing, we can help each other :)
My hobbies: meeting new friends, playing tennies ball , reading and so on.
My skype Id is [email protected].
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Chinese (Mandarin)Native
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- Cooperation It is incredible that two disabled men stride forward confidently hand in hand, with one of them losing his left leg and the other losing his right leg, lefting their crutches behind them. It is their cooperation prevent them losing balance and falling to the ground. Obviously, what is the cartoon shows is the critical importance of cooperation in morden society.December 1, 201700
- Plastic Surgery A young lady who wears a nice skirt but less blessed in the look is consulting a doctor for appearance changes. She desires to have brighter eyes, a higher nose bridge and a bigger lip so as to become more beautiful at all costs. Appearance changes fall into category of plastic surgery that is a branch of surgery, has gained tremendous popularity in recent decades.November 23, 201700
- Internet behavior In the Internet age, at least in theory, there is a tendency that we unconsciously imitate the behavior we see every day, which at some extend requires that we should control our emotions and pay attention to our words and deeds when we face rude actions and behaviors, in order to create a clean online environment. The Internet easily becomes an amplifier of negative opinions and negative habits. Our life will be affected if we cannot cope well with problem of network disorder. For solving it, government should begin fashioning legislative measures and penalty clause to protect online environment. In addition, a series of systematic course on Internet are also needed in school.November 23, 201720
HSK 5 - 写句子 41
词汇
1) 节省
他的发明会使我们节省许多时间和劳力（劳动力 would be better）
2) 限制
医生: 您必须限制白糖和盐的消费(摄入would be better, 摄入ofen is used in prescriptions of China, but 消费 is usually used in economic field in China)
3) 调皮
我的侄女是个调皮鬼。
4) 淘气
我受不了淘气的小孩。
5) 似乎
她似乎不是美国人。
6) 安慰
他被对手击败后，我尽力安慰他
7) 不足
我们军队的兵力不足。0 votedNovember 16, 20170- Could you help me correct my composition? Thank you very much! Those who are reluctant to receive their parents do not realize that whether they want to do it or not, caring for parents is a legal obligation, a Chinese law that went into effect many years ago bans disrespect towards elders and shirking of the responsibility of nursing aging parents. Children receive painstaking care from their parents, and in return, it is reasonable for our old parents to get what they deserve—our most respect, gratitude and attention.November 1, 201710
Please help to check this topic in Chinese
1）我们不久以前搬家了新房子。 （我们不久以前搬到了一个新房子里 or 我们不久以前搬家了,搬到了一个新房子里。）我们的新房子非常宽敞。我认为这套房子不错。我很满意。房子里有宽敞的客厅和厨房，几个睡房( “卧室”)，还有洗手间和洗澡间(“浴室” would be better)。
2）我的朋友住在邻居的街区里。 （我的朋友住在附近的街区里）。
3）这地方每天都打扫（这地方每天都被打扫）。他每天都打扫自（自己）的房间。
4）我家里有沙发、空调，冰箱、电脑，电视，微波炉等。
5）剧院旁边有一家公园。公园里到处都是漂亮的花和旧(generally，"旧" describes the things whose qualities is not very good after being used for a long time)的树木（古老的树木）。从前他时常在公园里逛荡。
6）孩子们在花园里游戏（孩子们在公园里嬉戏 or 孩子们在公园里玩游戏）。这花园很漂亮
7）我哥哥住在河附近，但是城市离里很远（但是那里离城市很远）。
8) 公司里空调不好，太闷了。工长(in Chinese we usually don't use it . )把关空调了（老板把空调关了）0 votedOctober 31, 20170- Could you help me correct my composition? Thank you very much! Being kicked away like a “ball”, a poor father, who abandoned by his children, is sitting on the ground, at the same time, his children concentrated all their energies on “guarding the goal”. Even though what they wear tells people that they have abilities to look after their old father, but none of them is willing to. The ironic illustration reveals a thought-provoking social phenomenon—some young men deny taking responsibility to taking care of their weak parents who denoted everything to their children, but aimed at nothing, which has resulted in empty loneliness even poverty in later years of their parents. The reason is that, these young people, laboring under the belief that supporting the elders is exhausting and time- consuming, seem to neglect how they were raised by their parents.October 31, 201730
- Could you help me correct it?thank you very much Dear Mr. Wang, I am writing to express my great gratitude to you for employing me as your secretary three months ago. During this time, I have benefited greatly from working together with such a group of trusted and talented colleagues, and this experience would be unforgettable in my whole life. As a young man who graduated from Academy of Art & Design, however, I find this job doesn’t correspond well with my abilities and educational background. In addition, the workplace is far away from my home, as a result, it takes me almost three hours to commute every day, which extremely exhausts me. Based on those reasons, I decide to quit my job. I feel so sorry about the convenience I have caused, and I will finish all the handovers for an orderly transition until you find an ideal candidate, if needed. Please take my request into your consideration.October 19, 201720
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