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Cooperation
It is incredible that two disabled men stride forward confidently hand in hand, with one of them losing his left leg and the other losing his right leg, lefting their crutches behind them. It is their cooperation prevent them losing balance and falling to the ground. Obviously, what is the cartoon shows is the critical importance of cooperation in morden society.
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Food Waste
Two nicely dressed men left the restaurant after dinner, leaving all sorts of food wasted and leftovers including half of a fish, a bottle of wine, some pieces of bread on the table. Acoording to the figures, the worth of food waste every year is up to 200 billion RMB.
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Plastic Surgery
A young lady who wears a nice skirt but less blessed in the look is consulting a doctor for appearance changes. She desires to have brighter eyes, a higher nose bridge and a bigger lip so as to become more beautiful at all costs. Appearance changes fall into category of plastic surgery that is a branch of surgery, has gained tremendous popularity in recent decades.
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Internet behavior
In the Internet age, at least in theory, there is a tendency that we unconsciously imitate the behavior we see every day, which at some extend requires that we should control our emotions and pay attention to our words and deeds when we face rude actions and behaviors, in order to create a clean online environment.
The Internet easily becomes an amplifier of negative opinions and negative habits. Our life will be affected if we cannot cope well with problem of network disorder. For solving it, government should begin fashioning legislative measures and penalty clause to protect online environment. In addition, a series of systematic course on Internet are also needed in school.
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Those who are reluctant to receive their parents do not realize that whether they want to do it or not, caring for parents is a legal obligation, a Chinese law that went into effect many years ago bans disrespect towards elders and shirking of the responsibility of nursing aging parents.
Children receive painstaking care from their parents, and in return, it is reasonable for our old parents to get what they deserve—our most respect, gratitude and attention.
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Being kicked away like a “ball”, a poor father, who abandoned by his children, is sitting on the ground, at the same time, his children concentrated all their energies on “guarding the goal”. Even though what they wear tells people that they have abilities to look after their old father, but none of them is willing to.
The ironic illustration reveals a thought-provoking social phenomenon—some young men deny taking responsibility to taking care of their weak parents who denoted everything to their children, but aimed at nothing, which has resulted in empty loneliness even poverty in later years of their parents. The reason is that, these young people, laboring under the belief that supporting the elders is exhausting and time- consuming, seem to neglect how they were raised by their parents.
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Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to express my great gratitude to you for employing me as your secretary three months ago. During this time, I have benefited greatly from working together with such a group of trusted and talented colleagues, and this experience would be unforgettable in my whole life.
As a young man who graduated from Academy of Art & Design, however, I find this job doesn’t correspond well with my abilities and educational background. In addition, the workplace is far away from my home, as a result, it takes me almost three hours to commute every day, which extremely exhausts me. Based on those reasons, I decide to quit my job.
I feel so sorry about the convenience I have caused, and I will finish all the handovers for an orderly transition until you find an ideal candidate, if needed. Please take my request into your consideration.
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As is shown, on the football filed a race is on, a young player hesitate to shoot by the thought of the goalkeeper’s massive size, which in fact significantly overstated due to his fear, almost covering the net. At the same time, in the goalkeeper’s mind, he is so smaller than he actually is that guarding the goal becomes a mission impossible.
The cognitive errors of overrating opponents as well as underrating our own strength will mislead us into thinking that we cannot overcome life’s difficulties. However, we all know that once con-fronting challenges, possessing courage is of utmost importance. A professor of psychology at Northeastern University says that those who have confidence in themselves and in their abilities are more likely to become executives and even leaders compared with their peers. He adds that the research on how human’s career achievement influenced by mental states and behavior as well, suggested just 42% of most successful people’s achievement would be attributed to their competence and other external factors.
Obviously, the knot of the mater lies in the lack of self-confidence, instead of scarce capability. And as we keep at building more trust in ourselves, we will begin to build our self-confidence, one that make it possible for all of us to go out and do our own things without being afraid of failure.
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A bottle overturned, spilling the half of its water on the floor, for this, two men responded totally differently. One man, feeling extremely sad, signed: “ All has gone!” But the other walked ahead in a hurry to raise up the bottle, and said with great gratitude:“There is still some water left.”Obviously, the illustration suggest the importance of the optimistic attitude towards difficulties in life.
The bottle represents the inexorable challenges we faced, the pessi-mistic people characterize those who just focus on the lost and are daunted by the obstacles. Comparing with them, some wiser people always keep a positive attitude to life and try to find solutions. There is no doubt that the latter is right choice. The reason is self-evidence, the challenges, stress, pain or sadness is there whether you like it or not, the best way to cope with these problems is to confront them. A good movie, Forrest Gump, told a story of a disabled but optimistic man overcame the difficulties and finally gained success. We can learn a life lesson from this movie.
Actually, when we take a risk, we cannot know beforehand what will happen, but if we try our best we are certain to gain something positive from the experience whatever we win or lose. Facing the challenges, courage and an optimistic attitude can uplift us. As the saying goes: To say there is no hope is to make it so.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
As a freshman in our university, I am writing to extend my gratitude for the service you have provided in the library where I spend much of my spare time reading and increasing my professional knowledege. To improve the service , I would like to put forward several suggestions.
First, there is an urgent for computers lined to a network, which can greatly faciliate our information research, otherwise it's time-consuming for us to find out what kind of books and documents are we really want. Moreover, some books on shelves are out of date and then are little value to our study and paper writing, it would be more convenient if the libaray could purchas more newly published books and magazines. But in general, the service you offered is high standard.
I hope you will find the above proposals conducive, and thanks for you consideration.
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