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Could you help me correct it?thank you very much Dear Mr. Wang, I am writing to express my great gratitude to you for employing me as your secretary three months ago. During this time, I have benefited greatly from working together with such a group of trusted and talented colleagues, and this experience would be unforgettable in my whole life. As a young man who graduated from Academy of Art & Design, however, I find this job doesn’t correspond well with my abilities and educational background. In addition, the workplace is far away from my home, as a result, it takes me almost three hours to commute every day, which extremely exhausts me. Based on those reasons, I decide to quit my job. I feel so sorry about the convenience I have caused, and I will finish all the handovers for an orderly transition until you find an ideal candidate, if needed. Please take my request into your consideration.

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Could you help me correct it this? Thank you very much.

Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to express my great deepest gratitude to you for employing me as your secretary three months ago. During this time, I have benefited greatly from working together with such a group of trusted and talented colleagues, and this experience will be unforgettable in for the rest of my whole life.
As a young man who graduated from the Academy of Art & Design, however, I find that this job doesn’t correspond well with my abilities and educational background. In addition, the workplace is far away from my home, and as a result, it takes me almost three hours to commute every day, which extremely exhausts me extremely. Based on these reasons, I have decided to quit my job.
I feel so sorry about the inconvenience I have caused, and I will finish all the handovers for an orderly easy transition until you find an ideal candidate to replace me, if needed. Please take my request into your consideration.

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