I wanna speak in English!

Hello everyone, this is my first text on Italki and I am very enthusiastic. I will not use google translate anymore and want to learn how to speak and write in English very well. My name is Daniele and i'm 24 years old, I am Italian and studying for my master degree at University of study in Trento, in the north of Italy. When I was young I was not wise when learning English,  I never studied it in the right way, and now I am paying the consequences. English is around me in every moment of my life and i feel very uncomfortable when I can't express my self and my thoughts in a way that represents "the real me". I can understand well when i have to read or listen to someone or something. However, I have a lot of problems with my communication skills and I wish to improve these.
I will write an article each Friday to register my improvement, I would be really happy to receive all comments about these texts.
Thanks to everybody and have a nice weekend.

Well written, and good work.

You need to work on sentence structure, spelling and conjunction words.

For example you use "i'm" a little too much to describe what you want to do. 
Other from that, only minor things to change.

Hope this helps :)

A terrible thing happened today.

It's cloudy in Taiwan, I was going to help the other division to use the "Fork Lift Truck", don't get me wrong, i'm not a logistics specialist.
When I was driving about thirty minutes on my way, I discovered someone lying down by a container car about five minutes away, I thought to myself "what is going on in my mind". After ten minutes i heard the sound of an ambulance.
Eventually i realize that the person lying down on the ground is the same department as I. He was a Quality co-worker, i felt sorry for them. I should have jumped from the Fork Lift Truck and ran to him at the time.

His head was hit by the container car door and the sharp edge of the corner. There was a lot of blood on the ground.

God bless him and I hope he gets better soon.

This was good, however, you need to use the capital "I" when it is on it's own.
To use the words rather than the numbers and to complete sentences when describing things.

Hope this helps :)

Monday afternoon

Hi guys!

I have been learning English since last year in August/September and I've been learning many things everyday.
I'm the kind of person who can't stand seeing something new and leave it behind. I go after new words or new topics to learn more because I know that doing these things, will improve my English skills.

Yesterday, I saw something that I'd already seen, although I didn't go deeper to study it. I'm talking about Delexical Verbs.
It has been great to study it, and I guess It'll be very nice to me.
When I started, it sounded a bit dodgy to me, but now I think I'm doing well.

So, what do you think about Delexical Verbs? Have you ever heard about this? May I carry on learning it? will it be benefit?

eg. Yesterday I was in no mood FOR A WALK, that's why I TOOK A COLD SHOWER in the afternoon and then I started reading some English Books. It was my day of sheer bliss.

Thank you for reading.

Could you correct me, please.

This is good, however, you need to work on conjunction and sentence structure.

Hope this helps :) 

STEREOTYPE PEOPLE

People use a lot of ways to communicate with each other. As to speak, body language, mimics, gestures, intuitions, feelings, even metaphysical perception. The most common communicated form is to speak. It has idioms, stereotype words, traditional things.
So people use them to understand each other or explain something. All countries have idioms, stereotype words,…ect.

Our topic is "stereotype and what it means to stereotype people". I can give some example; erkek fatma, hanım evladı, maço, kıro, inek, apaçi, ana kuzusu, sulugöz, eski kafalı, mülayim, çıt kırıldım, çöp çatan, varyemez (a person who has a lot of Money, but is ungenerous), tilki (crafty person), geri kafalı (not an open minded person), tavuk (a person who sleeps early), felaket tellalı (a person who thinks  negatively every time), meralı melehat, vurdum duymaz, nanemolla (a person who can become sick easily or be affected from everything), evladiyelik, beyzadem, paşam…ect. My mom use "ecladiyelik" like this, when I cook food too much, my mon says: ‘Evladiyelik pişirdin!’. It means you cooked too much and that much food can be-quested to your grandchildren. One more example; ‘evladiyelik yoğurt’ means market yogurt. In other words, market doesn’t spoil and it can stay for your grandchild.

Stereotype words usually are used to give a nickname, to jest, to explain something much better, or they can be used to praise a thing or to vilify. Take the ‘Kıros’, for example. I can say that they are a kind of people who don’t obey traffic rules, rude and have odd dressing style. Stereotype words are also used for good meanings like ‘Paşam’, ‘Beyzadem’ to pay a compliment.
As for me, words are used badly. Consequently, it depends on what you mean.
People called me ‘keçi kulak’, when I was nine or ten because, I used to part hair in the middle and tie them. An another example, my friend called me nerd when I was in middle school to friendly joke with me. That stereotype given to me is not a problem if it does not cause any trouble, misunderstanding or upset someone. I read nicknames that are given can affect people badly in their future.
People should pay more attention when they use them, because it can hurt.

This is great, your grammar and sentence structure needs a little work. 

If you go through what I have corrected you will see that little things can change the meaning.

Hope this helps :)

The weather of today

It was sunny today. I got up at 7:30 a.m. I had breakfast and also did the housework. I had lunch at 11 a.m. After lunch, I had slept for one and a half hours. Later, I went to the emporium, however, I bought nothing. I saw many children playing on the playground, they seemed to be very happy. A foreigner, speaking in English, taught the children how to slide plate. His accent sounded like he was an
American. I wanted to chat with him, but he was busy. So I changed my mind and went home.

This is very good, what you need to work on is longer sentences and sentence structure.

I hope this helps :)

Could you correct my English?

1. I might be able to continue being optimistic in-which my boyfriend stays with me.
2. He says "she is so beautiful, that he becomes shy".

This is good, well done. When talking about what people say, quote marks are essential ("    ") :)

I am, indeed an English teacher. I can help teach you english if you wish? :)