A terrible thing happened today
It's cloudy in Taiwan, i was going to help the other division to use the "Fork Lift Truck", don't get me wrong, i'm not a logistics specialist.
When i was driving about 30 minutes on my way, i found that someone lied down by a container car about 5 mins, i thought what is going on in my mind after 10 minutes i heard ambulance sound.
eventually, i realize that the person lied down on the ground is my same department(Quality) co-worker, i felt sorry to me. I should have jumped from Fork Lift Truck and running to him at that time.
His head hit by container car door, something sharp edge, and much blood on the ground
God bless him and getting better.
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A terrible thing happened today.
It's cloudy in Taiwan, I was going to help the other division to use the "Fork Lift Truck", don't get me wrong, i'm not a logistics specialist.When I was driving about thirty minutes on my way, I discovered someone lying down by a container car about five minutes away, I thought to myself "what is going on in my mind". After ten minutes i heard the sound of an ambulance.
Eventually i realize that the person lying down on the ground is the same department as I. He was a Quality co-worker, i felt sorry for them. I should have jumped from the Fork Lift Truck and ran to him at the time.
His head was hit by the container car door and the sharp edge of the corner. There was a lot of blood on the ground.
God bless him and I hope he gets better soon.
This was good, however, you need to use the capital "I" when it is on it's own.
To use the words rather than the numbers and to complete sentences when describing things.
Hope this helps :)
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