The weather of today
It was sunny today. I got up at 7:30 a.m. Having have breakfast, I did the housework. I had lunch at 11 a.m. After lunch, I had slept for one and half hours. Later, I went to the emporium but bought nothing. I saw many children playing on the playground. They seemed to be very happy. A foreigner, speaking in English, taught the children how to slide plate. His accent, sounded like
American. I wanted to chat with him, but he was busy. So I gave up my mind and went home.
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The weather of today
It was sunny today. I got up at 7:30 a.m. I had breakfast and also did the housework. I had lunch at 11 a.m. After lunch, I had slept for one and a half hours. Later, I went to the emporium, however, I bought nothing. I saw many children playing on the playground, they seemed to be very happy. A foreigner, speaking in English, taught the children how to slide plate. His accent sounded like he was anAmerican. I wanted to chat with him, but he was busy. So I changed my mind and went home.
This is very good, what you need to work on is longer sentences and sentence structure.
I hope this helps :)
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