Speaking topic about a person I admire, please correct my note if there is are any mistakes. Thanks.

I'm going to talk about my mum because she has been a major influence in my life.

She's 4 feet 9, the same high height as me and has a shoulder-length hair; her hair is a mixture of it's mixed with black and grey colour. She's a hard-working, patient, persistent and a warm-hearted person. She believes all people are brothers and sisters and we should help each other. There's a possibility that I have inherited some of these traits as I am now working as a nurse now.

I admire my mum because I think she brought raised me and my brother, and sister my siblings and I up well. To me, she is definitely the one who I can turn to for advice, not only because she is my mother but also because we are like good friends.

She has inspired me in a couple of ways. Perhaps I should mention that she suffered a stroke a few years ago, but that didn't defeat her. She was having a difficulty of moving her right arm and leg, but she kept going even when some physical exercises hurt her so much. Now, she can pedal a bike, cook for us and even drive a car without any problems. I'm so proud of her and she is always a good role model for me.