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Letter to University Dear Ms Smith, I am writing to express my interest in the computer science program provided in Indiana university . I need to know information about the duration of program , curriculum , fees . can you please tell me about the future Jobs can graduates have after they finish the program ? if you send to me a brochure about that it will be good . another issue I want to ask about the types of accommodation available in the university and it is cost . about me , I finished my secondary school on 1st of June 2016 . I have got 87% degree in the science section . I had the academic IELTS exam in last august and my overall mark was 7.5 ( 7.5 in writing , 8 in reading , 7 in listening , 8 in speaking ) . kindly send to me the list of document needed for the university acceptance . I look forward to hearing from you . Regards Tom Jonson

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Letter to University

Dear Ms. Smith,

I am writing to express my interest in the cComputer sScience program provided in at Indiana uUniversity . I need would like to know information about the duration of the program , curriculum , and fees . can Could you also please tell me about the future Jjobs (Given the context I would probably use the word careers instead of jobs) can graduates could have after they finish the program. ? if you could send to me a brochure with this information it would be much appreciated.about that it will be good .  aAnother issue I want would like to ask about is the types of accommodations available in at the university and there it is cost . (I would probably put this sentence before asking for the brochure as it might be contained in that information.) 

aAbout me , I finished my secondary school (high school?) on 1st of June 1, 2016 . I have got received 87% degree in the science section . I had the academic IELTS exam in last aAugust, and my overall mark was 7.5 (7.5 in writing , 8 in reading , 7 in listening , 8 in speaking ) .

If you could please (more polite) kindly send to me the list of documents needed for the university acceptance it would be much appreciated.

I look forward to hearing from you, .
Regards

Tom Jonson
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Letter to University

Dear Ms Smith,

I am writing to express my interest in the computer science program provided at Indiana University. I need to know information about the duration of program, curriculum, and fees.

Can you please tell me about the future Jobs can graduates have after they finish the program? if you send to me a brochure about that it will be good.

Another issue I want to ask about the types of accommodation available in the university and its cost.


About me, I finished my secondary school on 1st of June 2016. I have got 87% degree in the science section. I had the academic IELTS exam in the last august and my overall mark was 7.5 ( 7.5 in writing, 8 in reading, 7 in listening, 8 in speaking ). 

Kindly send to me the list of document needed for the university acceptance.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Regards
Tom Jonson

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