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Maggie Cheng
Speaking topic about a person I admire, please correct my note if there is any mistake. Thanks. I'm going to talk about my mum because she has been a major influence in my life. She's 4 feet 9, the same high as me and has a shoulder-length hair; it's mixed with black and grey colour. She's a hard-working, patient, persistent and warm-hearted person. She believes all people are brothers and sisters and we should help each other. There's a possibility that I have inherited some of these traits as I am working as a nurse now. I admire my mum because I think she brought me and my brother and sister up well. To me, she is definitely the one who I can turn to for advice, not only because she is my mother but also we are like good friends. She has inspired me in a couple of ways. Perhaps I should mention that she suffered a stroke a few years ago, but that didn't defeat her. She was having a difficulty of moving her right arm and leg, but she kept going even some physical exercises hurt her so much. Now, she can pedal a bike, cook for us and even drive a car without any problems. I'm so proud of her and she is always a good role model for me.

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Speaking topic about a person I admire, please correct my note if there is are any mistakes. Thanks.

I'm going to talk about my mum because she has been a major influence in my life.

She's 4 feet 9, the same high height as me and has a shoulder-length hair; her hair is a mixture of it's mixed with black and grey colour. She's a hard-working, patient, persistent and a warm-hearted person. She believes all people are brothers and sisters and we should help each other. There's a possibility that I have inherited some of these traits as I am now working as a nurse now.

I admire my mum because I think she brought raised me and my brother, and sister my siblings and I up well. To me, she is definitely the one who I can turn to for advice, not only because she is my mother but also because we are like good friends.

She has inspired me in a couple of ways. Perhaps I should mention that she suffered a stroke a few years ago, but that didn't defeat her. She was having a difficulty of moving her right arm and leg, but she kept going even when some physical exercises hurt her so much. Now, she can pedal a bike, cook for us and even drive a car without any problems. I'm so proud of her and she is always a good role model for me.
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Speaking topic about a person I admire, please correct my note if there is any mistake. Thanks.

I'm going to talk about my mum because she has been a major influence in my life.

She's 4 feet 9, the same height as me and has a shoulder-length hair; it's mixed with black and grey colour. She's a hard-working, patient, persistent and warm-hearted person. She believes all people are brothers and sisters and we should help each other. There's a possibility that I have inherited some of these traits as I am working as a nurse now.

I admire my mum because I think she brought me and my brother and sister up well. To me, she is definitely the one who I can turn to for advice, not only because she is my mother but also we are like good friends.

She has inspired me in a couple of ways. Perhaps I should mention that she suffered a stroke a few years ago, but that didn't defeat her. She was having a difficulty of moving her right arm and leg, but she kept going even though some physical exercises hurt her so much. Now, she can pedal a bike, cook for us and even drive a car without any problems. I'm so proud of her and she is always a good role model for me.
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Speaking topic about a person I admire, please correct my note if there is any mistake. Thanks.

I'm going to talk about my mom because she has been a major influence in my life.

She's 4 feet 9 inches tall, the same height as me and has a shoulder-length hair; it's mixed with black and grey. She's a hard-working, patient, persistent and warm-hearted person. She believes all people are brothers and sisters and we should help each other. There's a possibility that I have inherited some of these traits as I am working as a nurse now.

I admire my mom because I think she hasbrought me and my brother and sister up well. To me, she is definitely the one who I can turn to for an advice, not only because she is my mother but also we are like good friends.

She has inspired me in a couple of ways. Perhaps I should mention that she suffered a stroke a few years ago, but that didn't defeat her. She was having difficulty in moving her right arm and leg, but she kept going. Even some physical exercises hurt her so much. Now, she can pedal a bike, cook for us and even drive a car without any problems. I'm so proud of her and she is always a good role model for me.

Very well written! :)


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