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我住在佛罗里达。 我是巴西人和美国人。
我住在佛罗里达,是巴西人也算是一个美国人。
(This modification like long and complex English sentences it will read smoothly.)我出生在巴西, 可是我在美国长大。
我十九岁。,我会说英语,葡萄牙文, 还有一点中文。
我最近也开始学日本语和韩国语, 不过我 日本语比韩国语知道更多。
(“日本语”“韩国语”China call the habit“日语”“韩国”)
我爱学语言!某一天,我将会去这些都的国家。
请帮我提高我的中文水平,请教我新词汇,我会用在这些小文章里。我也会帮你学英语,也给你提高英语的方法!
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0 votedJanuary 12, 20170我的介绍!
你们好, 朋友们! 这是我的第一个篇日记小文章。(“日记”and“小文章”mean is different.)
我的中文名字是季娃娜。
在中学,我学中文学了四年中文了在中学, 可是有几乎两年我不没怎么学习很多。
(After such modifications, no one can feel you are a foreigner)
现在我是一名大学第二年大二的学生。
("大学第二年的学生"China call the habit “大二的学生”)
(In this sentence"现在我是大学第二年的学生",if you add"一名",the sentence will read smoothly.)
0 votedJanuary 12, 20170- Welcome to our club ------Ladies and gentlemen,fist of all,let me express thanks in the name of us all for your participation in the name of us all.The yourself was full of life and character.With many of you join our club ,we can foresee that influence takes club in a whole new direction! ------All right, let me introduces the club backdrop and the club actuality.Eight years age,the club was set up by six people of dormitory.Now,the club has a large membership ( a membership of 180).Most of the members of this club are wit, whimsy, and play.And It's where you meet, relax and exchange ideas.There are a lot of funny things you'll feel interesting,so I will not explain each one. ------Trust me, you guys are gonna so love the club. (thanks your changes )January 11, 201731
- My morning I did an internship before yesterday.So I had to get up to go to work before 7:00. The alarm did go off at 6:40 but all I turn off the alarm. Then the alarm did go off at 7:00 again.oh,my god!It is a tough time for me.I was freezing when I was out of bed and winter's cold into my body .But if I turn over and go back to sleep the boss maybe took my work away.Why have a choices so cruel in the world?In the end,I made a good decision for me. Oh,good morning,world! (Can you revise the composition for me?thanks!)January 10, 201720

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