Gwen
French
Jan 17, 2020
I had a lovely time chatting with Jacqueline, she's friendly, easy to talk to and her French is remarkable. Merci encore !
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The tiny house - Thank you for your correction!
I remember when we decided to get out of (Possible to say this but in writing it is better to say leave) Paris for a couple of days! I was tired of this citizen stressing( not sure what you mean by citizen stressing, better to say stressful life) life! I needed to take a break and restore myself, my thougts, all my being (again not totally in-correct, but better to say every part of me) was asking me for this. We finally rent (rented) a beautiful, tiny house in the village of Rânes, in the department (region) of "l'Orne" in Normandy. The landscape where the tiny house was situated was so beautiful. (It was beautifully situated) Could you imagine a place without a noise (without noise), surrounded by trees, plants, and so many, (many) kinds of flowers…? In the middle of all this, a tiny cat! I remember the birds singing in the morning, the perfume of the roses in the garden, the cute ( a lake is not cute) little lake quiet (quiet and peaceful lake, don't use too many adjectives) and peaceful, and the pontoon at the edge of the water where (remained) the small boat I used every day to relax myself remained ( which I used everyday to relax)! If the sun was shining every day its sunset was amazing too. The colors(american spelling of colour, english is Colour) remembered (reminded) me some romantic movies (of a romantic movie). Yes, the colors were wonderful. Contemplating the light of the sun through the trees, I felt like I was dreaming (also possible but I think better to say made me feel as if I was dreaming).Well done, very small errors, but these tiny improvements will help you to write like a native english person :) !
