Hello! Could you help me to correct this paragraph? (PART II) Thanks in advange! :) As for my ideal job in the future, I really want to both have a nice, useful, clean, safety and colorful lab and be in a good team because most important thing is has a harmonius team for variety experiments. On the other hand if we look at future, scientists will be doing amazing researches because of developing technology. For example we will access to knowledge, will contact on other researcher and will be going to the lab easly and we can also spend less time for all of things. Consequently if we look at scientific develop in the past and future, we can say that we are hopeful for scientific news. However we musn’ t forget only thanks to people who love their job we can preceed at the future.

Hello! Could you help me to correct this paragraph? (PART I) Thanks in advange! :) Dream Job There are many ideal jobs that people dream about. Some people says "I want to earn a lot of money", others says "not important money for me, just want to do job I love" generally. Of course, these two thinking are crucial however if we mention about being scientist, we have one way: We must love our jobs. Now, we think about scientist who lived in the past such as Rosalin Franklin. She when try to study of which DNA forms, she died for DNA mutation. Afterwards they who team of researcher DNA discovered DNA and they won the Nobel Prize. So she has a ironic story. If she didn't love her job, she give up this way and maybe she didn't die for this. In the past scientific jobs don't easy, you see. Now if we are look, research are more simple than past as we have developing technology. What's important here that researchers conduct well-designed experiment.